I'm trying to submit this the second time with minor modifications since for the first time I got a decline that made absolute no sense.

the design seems really big.

Can you convey this message in fewer words? Seems a bit cumbersome.

eh its horrible.

it isnt horrible.. its gorgeous..i guess to me, it strikes me as one of those designs you see on little cute kids teeshirts. i love i love i love... - XOXO

That's a really bad font choice (no integration into the design at all), the colour isn't great, the cinder block has only one entrance (surely a maze is the act of putting obstacles between an entrance and an exit), and the slogan is a cliche you could find in lame markets all over the world. And it's too big.

Other than that, great design.

(maybe the decline did make sense after all?)

Well I see that you got the point in a way after all at least on your subcontious level... the maze that you live in surely has just one entrance and no real exit.

I think the text is completly crushing your illustration...
You should get it smaller, good idea, anyway.

perhaps it's the text that makes this design slightly less impressive. i like the idea, it's a witty design for a shirt and would work well however if you print the message of the shirt on it sometimes it can kill the effect. not too sure how to fix this :-\

Sorry, but this has been a bumper sticker for aeons.

too big! 4

yeah helloratty, but it hasnt been a shirt!

make the text a little more artistic too.

why is the hole black? shouldnt it show through to the maze, which is grey? i dunno, kinda neat idea but your execution blows.

i'm getting the same feeling i get when i read the "you laugh because i'm different, i laugh because you're all the same" shirts. not realy friendly

but you cant lose to that maze..

the maze is cute... em... reduce the font size, too heavy!!!

Excellent concept, poor execution... This is the downfall of alot of good work out there. The illustration looks hurried, the typeface is terrible and way too large as is the entire piece within the context of the shirt. However, i love the message and really wish the final product had come out more desireable... good job, and better luck next time.

I'd like it without any words--that way it leaves it open for what you want the maze to represent.

Cool idea, but I'd drop the text

...walk this way. for e.g.

Too big, font sucks, too much text, and yeah. A zero from me, sorry.

I have seen that maze without those words. Did you post your first attempt somewhere?

this would make a good poster.

I like this.

Sell this one to Wal-mart