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trees! by Javi G

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1143 days ago

Submitted on:

Aug 18 '05

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1,187 people

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31 comments

Final average score:

2.28 out of 5

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by Javi G

my 5th post and i hope you like it!
i have tried to do something different! something opposite to my regular "cartoon" style!
this shirt is about a concept: everything comes back!
i kindly request your appreciated comments and suggestions.

nice day for a murder on Aug 18 '05

i really like this...trees are suck amazing and beautiful things, and the shirt has a great concept behind it. i'd buy.

nebagakid on Aug 18 '05

this is great great great! i would guess you would not need the type, but it does not detract from it

OrangeJuiceRevolution on Aug 18 '05

yeah, loose the text.

the concept is awesome though.

4

short_chef on Aug 18 '05

This would be the most shitting shirt without the text. It looses all wit and meaning. People who hate text just because its text are mind fucks. Keep the text.

Cinematic on Aug 18 '05

This is a wonderful shirt. I think you need the text. So you should leave it. The text explains it all.

plankton on Aug 19 '05

make the autumn ground the same color as the leafs
still nice the way it is tho... 5$

quoperate on Aug 19 '05

these trees look really squished

cylonsympathizer on Aug 19 '05

Sorry, but the text does ruin it. It's like someone who explains the punchline of a joke, when you got it to begin with. Lose it, and I'd buy it.

RjThreadless on Aug 19 '05

I like it, and I like the text.

lockergnome on Aug 19 '05

cute.

corallus05 on Aug 19 '05

i really like this alot. really a great idea!!!! 5

morbidboy on Aug 20 '05

I really do like this shirt... I just think it too much on one shirt

spitting_llama on Aug 20 '05

I love this design. Look, there are a lot if simpletons out there, like myself, who will look at the shirt sans text and say, "Oh look, trees. Yay..." But if you have the text on there, they say "Oh look, trees. 'The Comeback?' Oh, I get it! What a cool shirt!"

You see? Keep the text.

sellyourfeeling on Aug 20 '05

The text could work better in a different font,
and thne placed underneath the last tree could make it work better.
but the font def. needs to be there, just different somehow.

sheenbean on Aug 20 '05

I think this iz kool and the text makes it better... Id buy it but probably not without the text

destructedstar on Aug 20 '05

I like the retro layered effect on the leaves and trees, but my main concern is that women with ample bosoms won't be able to display the winter scene.

RaeKuusou on Aug 21 '05

the text is good, but the font is horrible. also, i'd put it so it was on the ground with the last tree, maybe the dark green or the orange instead of the white.

Fl5 Cowboy on Aug 21 '05

shouldn't the autumn tree have less leaves? just an idea.

pretty cool though.

Javi G on Aug 21 '05

hey fl5 cowboy! i also like exclamation marks and lack of capital letters!!!
thank you very much for all your comments! yes, maybe the autumn ground should be yellow! so doesn't the comeback's font work!?

nebagakid on Aug 21 '05

the font works, just give me the shirt damn it!

Mecanoid on Aug 21 '05

good concept, make it smaller

BLACKxCHOKERxCHAIN on Aug 22 '05

Good idea. It's very creative. I do think the autumn ground should be yellow, like you suggested. The font is nice, it fits. It's cute.

I'd buy it.

tightywhitey on Aug 22 '05

I like it!

What about putting them next to each other?

X | X
X | X

Like that?

aurelel on Aug 23 '05

another disposition will be better no ?