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This is an OK design, but- big much?
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that text is friggin 'uge, man.
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shrink it, and get rid of the "what?"
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I think that if you made the text smaller it would be good.
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I'm with silver girl. No need for the "what?" although it makes the shirt funny.
Also, it's too massive, but very nice colour choices. |
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I like the illustration, but its too big on the shirt
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i like that it's oversized. i think the colors are great. i like that it's bold, but has small details. i like the words. i like it a whole lot.
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i feel like if you get rid of the 'what' you simply must get rid of the 'if' as well. Perhaps even the '?', but then its just a whole new shirt iddn't it?
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It's the smaller what? on the lower right side Woosta.
Like it. |
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I think we could do with some downsizing, especially the text, but I like it a lot, including the "what?". Nice job.
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wow. LOVE <3 it.
i can feel it. :) |
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holy fuckig shit thats amazing
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great concept. more colors and for the love of god shrink the text
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hmm nice design of boy and girl but i dont like shirts that mention god. say something like "what if we were all figments of our own imagination"?
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I don't like the colour behind the text. I also don't like it that the speech box is so huge and boldly coloured, it detracts from the kids, escpecially as they're so light and pretty and all.
nothing wrong with shirts mentioning god, imo, and I like the 'what?'. |
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like the font and baloon design but don't care for the kids. They don't match each other in style.
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jbyron on Aug 23 '05 What about the kids do you feel doesn't match?
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wow. groovy design. i love everything about it.
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like the drawing and the what alot, but id like to see those things alone on the shirt, without the huge text, nut i guess that would kill the meaning of the design... so im torn... nice colorts though, and i like the drawing style.
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5andbuy
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i love the drawing, i think the speech bubble should be a little smaller though, 5 and buy anyways though.
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i like this design, but maybe make the text a bit smaller, but i would buy it!
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jbyron on Aug 24 '05 I know the speech baloon is crazy-overpowering - but the thing is, I actually liked this design best on the burgandy shirt where all the elements were very subtle, especially the speech baloon - but I didn't feel like I could submit it that way because the details wouldn't show up well enough to critique. Did that make sense? Anyway, thanks for the feedback everyone.
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As long as we are taking out words out randomly like what, lets get rid of a few others too. Scratch the "figments" and the "d" in God's. It would make the shirt way better.
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who cares? fuck "god"
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Lol, nice one Bacon.
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jbyron on Aug 24 '05 Well kitty, and this is solely based on your comment - but I think the obvious answer to your question would be: YOU.
I mean, who carries around so much hate for something or someone they care nothing about? |
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like much
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i LOVE this! i cant count the number of times thats happened to me. (dont worry i didnt use that exact quote.) i really like the cluelessness of the 'what. ' i buy three.
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i like the design very much, but i'd be more apt to buy this as a notebook cover or a poster than a t-shirt. i'm not sure i really like it much as a t-shirt.
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are we not?
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snaps. that's a friggin huge design.
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I love it as a T shirt.
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Smaller.
But haven't I seen this as a catchphrase before? |
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Make the text smaller, but leave it large in porportion to the people. And I would suggest removing the curly things on either side of the text, they seem unnecessary.
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What if the counterspaces of letterforms are figments of our imagination?
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H U G E.
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this one sucks, screw your god and his imagination. children are evil!
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