my wish
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Aug 18 '05
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Skipper6745 on Aug 18 '05 I don't see a shirt anywhere..
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Skipper6745 on Aug 18 '05 Wait, I see it now.
It's kinda cluttered. |
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The brush looks more like a spoon
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I'd like it much better if it were just a person riding a dinosaur in front of the setting sun. That I could go for.
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seconded.. it seems allover the place right now
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i'm with that garden.
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it seems to busy.
I agree with Granada. There should just be a person riding a dinosaur. |
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i want a dinosaur
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This took me a long time to understand what was going on. I really like it, but maybe you can design it in a way where the image is clearer?
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Maybe you should put a person with the painting with a thought bubble containing the image of him riding the dinosaur and call it "wishful thinking".
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already a shirt called wishful thinking so nevermind
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i agree with you guys.. in hindsight it does seem very cluttered. I'll probably do a remake of the concept. But i just wanted to see what ppl mainly thought of the concept.
Gap: my wish is the title because my wish forever has been to make anything ive drawn come out. |
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oh.. and i think theres another submission with a cowboy riding a dinosaur.. so u can only image the plagerism comments id get
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huh? .... . . Oh! Please make the ground behind the hole in the wall a different color than the shirt. I was looking at it inside out- thought the hole in the wall was a floating peice of broken glass. I don't think its cluttered. It only has enough to tell the story. This would not be interesting if it only had a guy riding a dinosaur.
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it took me a while to get it...
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awesome idea, very unclear tho, maybe more depris around the broken wall and larger image of them riding away, not necessarily in the center of it
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i'd love to see just the easel and related (sans the person-riding-dino-on-the-horizon), personally.
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Try Interactive, or something...
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I'd buy it if I knew where the design was on the shirt...
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ok i get it now wait is thier a whole in the wall an dlike you can see him riding through it is that it?
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Wow. i LOVE it.
No Doubt <333 |
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I love this idea! If I changed anything, I would, as has been said, make the color of the ground outside green. I might also make the hole in the wall a little more dinosaur-shaped.
And to Gap's comment: I submitted the design called "Wishful Thinking" and I see no problem in you submitting this again under that title. However, I like the title you have now much better ... suits it, I think. 5 as is, and $5 with a few changes. Love it! |
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PS - I love how one side of the broken wall is indicated with a thicker line. That's good stuff, man!
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I like this. too bad it is really similar to a design I was about to submit :( Oh well it's different enough to submit anyway...
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thanks for the comments and critiques you guys! I was thinkin of the green outside.. but i didnt want it to be too colourful, but its probably better for it to be easier to understand.. as well with the more debris and , and the dino shaped hole.
-i didnt make it to clear, but the colour boxes to the right show the tshirt placement. just click them. |
2 days later
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the drwaing needs to be better. plus a dinosaur like a t-rex would never let your ride it around unless you had a t-rex whip which is very hard to acquire im betting you probably dont have one of those. and to acquire it you usually die in doin so. any way maybe go to a drawing board and clean it up and draaw in the t-rex whip in your hand. if you need help with the details of what a t-rex whip looks like you can write me but im probably going to have to kill you if i tell you. mike
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23 days later
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Hey, guy, how ya doin? Eh? Ya know what have really made this design better? Huh? Well, maybe if you had actually DRAWN the dinosaur instead of just borrowing the silhoute from a model for sale on the internet. Here's the link to the actual model. http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.indyrad.iupui.edu/public/jrafert/trexmcv.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.indyrad.iupui.edu/public/jrafert/mcvtrx.htm&h=307&w=500&sz=159&tbnid=Dj2OWnbJgQYJ:&tbnh=77&tbnw=127&hl=en&start=24&prev=/images%3Fq%3DTyrannosaurus%2Brex%26start%3D20%26svnum%3D10%26hl%3Den%26lr%3D%26sa%3DN
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