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I like this, I hope they'll still include in the competition because it's definately one of the better ones.
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Just pare it down to just the head and brain with the words in it. All the rest is not that attractive and distracts from your typography stunt.
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I didn't see the words either. There's too much else going on, and maybe I still wouldn't have - without the lines of "new york" being different, a slightly different color or thickness.
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I like the fact that the "New York" letters are subtle".
I agree that there are too many smaller pix at the bottom. How about keeping four of them? |
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i actually like the smaller pics at the bottom. im not fond of how 'new york' is blended it, the style of the writing is weird to me.
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i think it is fine the way it is. not a fan of all the clothes that say NEW YORK on them, but this still gets my vote. good stuff
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this was actually for the semi permanent competition. i could've sworn the deadline day was the 14th.
i actually wanted to upload a swf. to allow people to view more detail, but i couldn't get the file size down to 60kb. i think the vectors were too complex. anyway, i'm gonna upload a bigger version somewhere
if threadless would be kind enough to still consider this entry for the semi-permanent comp that would be so dope! please???