Good concept, but the execution's a bit lacking.

Yeah doesn't look like this one's going to make it very far judging from the lack of comments...

i thought they were butts until i saw the bag of coffee! lol. i think the onlooker bean needs a better look of horror on his face.

I like this.

I used to co-own an espresso shop, though, so of course I'm going to like it. XD

I like the idea but the design needs work.

The bean drinking the coffee looks like two seperate beans looking at each other, maybe remove the gray area from the middle and make it a darker brown to show shadow. This would make it five colors but I'm sure you could play around with the other elements to get it down to four.

I would really like this design and I hope you resubmit and get printed!!

I wasn't all too satisfied with the results myself, so I definately will be re-submitting. Thanks for your comments all ;)

hahaha! i got it!

when i saw it i didnt think of it as one bean watching the drinking one in horror, but rather as sort of two panels. First the bean is looking to make sure nobody is watching him, and then he starts canniblizing once he knows nobody can see him.

I don't know if that was just me, but if you could somehow make it clearer in your redo, I guess thatd maybe be better. Or not, I think I might actually prefer thinking about it the way i perceived it.

yea I thought they were butts too lol but I LOVE the idea and if you redesign it well I will most definitely buy it! I agree with the more horror on the onlooker beans face also

Ok I'm definately going to redesign it, but I need some suggestions how to make them look more like coffee beans. Darker? Skinnier? What?? Thanks =)