Threadless T-Shirts - Leaving The Nest

Leaving The Nest by twniehaus

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1145 days ago

Submitted on:

Aug 15 '05

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1,145 people

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25 comments

Final average score:

2.07 out of 5

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we all have to do it some day.

ionrave on Aug 15 '05

really think this shirt is beautiful.

aliea martina on Aug 15 '05

With out looking at the title I had no idea what the yellow was. The shirt isnt going to have the title on it to explain itself. Add some details to the nest to make the image more understandable

Gareth Jones on Aug 15 '05

Love it, but I'd echo aliea's suggestion to revise the nest a bit

onlybcusicare on Aug 15 '05

MINUS THE NEST

Ava Adore on Aug 15 '05

again.
nice colours though

spaiku on Aug 15 '05

i like it but the nest sort of looks like a lemon to me...

clockwkorange on Aug 15 '05

you sure have a warped definition of a peacock.

twniehaus on Aug 15 '05

hahhahahah damn straight

POLICEKEEPYOURHANDSABOVEYOURHEAD on Aug 15 '05

we all have to do it someday.

....lol

washintonville on Aug 16 '05

its unoriginality is amazing

jd84 on Aug 16 '05

haha-agreed-how many bird shirts do we have to see b4 someone realizes no one like them?

piankhi on Aug 16 '05

Why on earth do some people have to be such jackasses about bloody shirts?

Some people do like birds. Without the nest, the shirt loses it's meaning.

Anyway, I agree with what has been said earlier - Rework the nest a bit, it's kind of hard to see what it is without staring at it for a few moments. Other than that, I think it's really good.

Auro on Aug 16 '05

The nest looks like a bowl of cereal on first glance. Clean that up and it is a 5.

quoperate on Aug 16 '05

aww jeez Not another one. I really liked "Murder of...". The strings or dots make them seem tied down, I dont like it. That nest is not very good, looks like a wig.. *sigh* Can we move on to a new concept, please...

bigpig on Aug 16 '05

I don't like the look of the nest but the rest is good.

libbyzellers on Aug 17 '05

nest needs reworked, otherwise i like.

thomkat73 on Aug 18 '05

I'm afraid that the placement of the nest would make it look like birds were flying out of my pit. Great colors and idea.

Zaratino on Aug 19 '05

The reason we all like birds is because we have all dreamt that we could fly and be free. This is also the reason why I give this shirt a 5 and wich that I could wear it now. Me Gusta

beautifulmind on Aug 19 '05

i got that it was a nest right away, but it's kinda ugly. the birds are great though. i think if you made the nest a shade of brown i would buy it.
i also think placing the nest at the bottom corner would be an improvement. just my 2 cents.
it just seems like the kind of design that you could place lower. i like it.

RobotJElly on Aug 20 '05

I like the idea of making the nest brown and moveing it lower, otherwise i like it.

Naive on Aug 21 '05

You need to work on your follow through.

The 'rendered' t-shirt in the upper left looks awful. And that can make me look for craft issues elswhere in the design.

Right now I'm convinced that nest was textured by the necessity of ignorance rather than a concsious choice.

twniehaus on Aug 21 '05

how is ignorance a necessity? you try too hard to sound smart, and it ends up making you sound stupid.

Robotfood1 on Aug 21 '05

is naive serious?

twniehaus on Aug 21 '05

probably. haha.

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