It's a Real Battle (Revised)
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Aug 10 '05
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cigarettes 1 - internal organs 0
is that a kidney or what? |
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I think it's a lung, picturesonmyeyes.
The only thing I'd say is that the cig's fist looks like the lung/kidney's nose rather than a fist. Is the dot lower down a mouth or a belly button? |
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i agree with not a surfer rosa. make the fist look fistier so it doesnt get confused with the nose.
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and make the lung look lungier. perhaps the set of lungs would be more recognizable. that looks like a stomach to me.
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...it's good now <3
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I definitely agree that there should be a set of lungs.
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I thought the lung was a sausage.
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the lung totally looks like a fat pink banana. great idea though!
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any suggestions that i could get past the 4 color rule?
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Very good. I'm with the set of lungs people, but I would buy it as is.
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That fist should be the mouth, remove the belly-button-mouth thing, and make another fist on the side of that lungs head. Also, use the cigarette color to put a little detail on the filter. 3. Fix it up and it's a 4+.
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you should have done a lung or somthing.
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I like this one better than the other, but the lungs still looks like a... not- lung. :(
keep tinkering, is all I can say. |
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Is that a cigarette fighting a testicle?
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I agree, make the lung actually look like a lung.
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It may not look like a lung that much, but it definately does not look like a testicle.
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thats a big ciggie
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good idea....but to me it looked like a glue stick punching a pink bananna.
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At first I thought it was a human hot dog haha get it....
but then I realized and I think it's cute :) |
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I thought it was a weird pear. But yeah. I like it. I just wouldn't wear it.
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i like the idea, but the lung does need to be lung-ier.
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cigarettes vs. whoopie cushions?
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I LOVE your anti smoking propaganda. NOT
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Make the lung look less sausage-like and it'd be a winner.
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HAHAHAHAHA Voltaire! .........NOT
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Fistier fist, lungier lung, and I'd buy it in a heartbeat! $5
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great message no smoking!
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I agree with deadpanfool. 4.
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i'd buy it if i was a smoker but since i'm not i wouldn't, i really LOVE the idea though!
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angelaobscura, this is an anti-smoking shirt showing that cigarettes will kill your lungs.
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Yeah, this is really really good. A lot of your work is very good actually.
This design could be improved though. The main problem is that the lung doesn't look much like a lung; it could be just about any internal organ. Make another lung, so that there are two, and just make them both more...... lung-shaped. Look at pictures of lungs. I havent bought a threadless tshirt for about 6 months; I havent seen any that have really grabbed me. If this one is made, it will end the 6 month-long drought. SO IT HAD BETTER BE MADE! Keep up the good designs. |
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I agree with Mrweh, I'd die to have this shirt if the lung were fixed. I give it a 4, for now.
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I think that you have a good concept here on your hands, but I would have to say that it needs some fine polishing. Put a little more detail in both of the objects. The top of the Cig could use a contour line and some dark specks on the butt. I'd say change the lung's shape and add some lung-like veins in it.
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Well good news for those who like it. I will be making some touch ups on it and resubmitting it so thanks for all of the comments. For those who don't like it, you can give it another chance or just ignore, but thanks again for the comments.
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i didn't bother to read the comments, but it would be so cute if they had boxing gloves.
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i like it. i think its cute.
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i really like this. i'd buy it.
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i thought it was a kidney or liver *duh*
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I would buy this for my son to wear around his grandparents. He's 11, and we both love it. $5. We both think the lung looks like stomach. Maybe the Cig should have boxing gloves, but the lung or lungs should remain defenseless. Such a great shirt for old or young.
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