My therapist says I should confront you
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Aug 08 '05
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Hum… Nice idea but it still needs some work… I think you should integrate the drawing with typography on a better way…
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Nice shirt for the crazies, Lord knows they dont look good in birthday suites.
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uh...isnt it comfort? or maybe Im missing a joke?
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Hey, I really like the typography on this tee. I agree with Devius with the integration of the picture more, but dont get down hearted if this tee don't get past a 100 votes, Listen to the comments and re-submit. This is great work, dont through it away after one round. Plus it's better to get lots of feedback as you can adapt it. Sometimes i get none which makes it hard to improve it.
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ummm who would possibly wear this? ......
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reminds me too much of the mostly- text shirts from hot topic that so many people wear.
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Interesting concept, but maybe change the emphasis--center top the drawing, and place text below it, small, as if being passive-aggressive about confrontation.
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I personally am not a fan of the text, it does kind of give off that text only shirts you see everywhere. I would try and incorporate the text into the design so it does't stand out as much....
Take my comment with a grain of salt, Im not a text fan... |
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I think I'd like it more if it was just the text
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^ i agree, i love the text, but not so into the image. i would sooooooo buy.
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I would definitely buy this. And wear it to therapy... I love it.
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Maybe if the text was on the back... that would drive the point home even more.
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fiddlywink46-Nah, it's confront. For us crazies, we've been told many times to "confront our inner demons" or inner conflicts, inner voices, etc.
As for the shirt, I like it, but like the other comments, I agree that it reminds too much of the Hot Topic shirts saying stuff like "The voices in my head say they don't like you" etc. But I like this shirt better, especially with the drawing, it's pretty. If you maybe make some changes to the text (I'm not sure what though, sorry I can't be more specific) then I'd definately buy and also wear to therapy :) |
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neat I like it. |
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maybe you should try to find an audience/venue that would be more to your aparent tastes.
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I like it a lot, but I think I'd like it even more if the text was on the back. Or, even if the image was on the back. For some reason, it just looks strange to have them both on the same side.
I really like it, though. Thumbs up. |
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It-it reminds me of all those "I used to be schizophrenic" shirts.
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Too Hot Topic. Kill the text.
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I was going to say the same thing as Pengfish. When I saw this the first thing I thought of were those dumb "It's funny until someone gets hurt, then it's hilarious" shirts.
It's a good concept, nonetheless. |
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absolutltly perfect
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the text turns this into a hot topic novelty tee
i love the girl just lose the text |
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ditto on the hot topic style. but the illustration is really beautiful.
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love the text, lose the picture (or substitute a less pissweak, unassertive picture so it doesn't totally undermine the message of the text)
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pretty much waht most people say, put the text closer to thepicture in a lessdominatin font maybe? but the image is really great
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i think that the text should be small adn offset (as the picture is) and the picture should be bigger and slightly more towards the center. i like it though
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yeah, i agree with melancholy_smile.
swich'm! then i'd buy six!!!! |
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I agree with picturesonmyeyes....it is a bit like those annoying hot topic shirts. I'd try something new with the text on your design.
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I'd lose the picture altogether and just have the text
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i'd like the picture to be way bigger. i think the image is more powerful than the text, and should be treated as such. they work well together, but play around with the relative sizes and placement. overall, very cool, though. Cheers.
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I WOULD WEAR IT
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i like the drawing, but the text reminds me too much of something one would find at a hottopic
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I course I love it
But I can't get a read on whether most people think we should just go with text or just picture ? or that the main design issue is having them on the same side? another question who is our demographic (hehehehe) |
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