because you blogged disappointment, I'll leave feedback...
it is an OK design, but if you take away the title of the shirt (since it isn't included on the shirt anywhere), then you totally lose the frame of reference for the text on the shirt... and from what I've seen, text will almost instantly lower the rating of a shirt regardless... so you're kinda fighting an uphill battle there...
I really don't get why he has a cigar, either... and I think he's wearing shades? not sure... there's just not a lot that is remarkable about this particular design, but I'd definitely encourage you to keeping giving it a shot... better luck next time...
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