Rest in peace.

Nice design~

I don't understand this one, his shadow blends into the disco figure, but I can't figure the significance

You Would Be Seeing Me Do the Hussle right to the T Shirt Store To buy this one. Very Funny. I Wish I Was Around to do the Hussle. Oh to Bring back the Over Repetative Flow of Disco.

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At first glimpse I thought it was an inflatable doll. Bud Bundy styles!!! What's up with disco? I like the illustration tho, particularly the colours.

i dont mind the text, might work better as a whiteish chalk outline though rather than a shadow...

I totally agree with bananaphone. If it was a white chalk outline, it would be mush clearer

good idea, poor execution :(

I couldn't tell what this meant until I read the title, and that shouldn't be necessary.

http://www.onlinestorage.biz/users/Members/tofu_rok/Design/disco2.gif

Updated version, it was the best l could do getting a chalky outline.

i think they mean that white chalk outline when people die on the street. just the outline and no fill maybe. you could probably do that and lose the blood

Theres something wrong with the guys head... like its superimposed, or jutting out from his body or something... anyway its scary. But I love the concept.

Cool, I like it a lot. Except his head looks a lot like a cross between Elvis and Frankenstein. Otherwise, it's great

The guy needs to be wincing in anger with fists clenched. Then he would match his speech bubble. And the disco guy on the ground needs more work. In the updated version, the perspective is off. The upper shadow leg is completely skewed wrong. Also, what they mean by chalk outline is to just have a white outline on the ground that isn't filled in at all like you currently have it. You'd need to have a darker background (shirt color) for this to work out.

Thanks Kevindujour and others who have replied.

The guy in the pic was in shock but anger probably works better, anyway l do one more update however, l might do a whole revision and resubmit.

Frnakly l'm quite embarssed by this now.

the blood is weird.. it looks like its dripping further down from the ground..

maybe some text? it's hilarious once you get it though. :)

Seriously, don't be embarrassed at all. It's a really great idea people are just giving their input. If you're happy with the way it is then don't change it. I like it though.

Thanks for the kind words, l understand people are giving me input it irks me that they're right and it could have been so much better for it.

Don't be embarrassed, It's obvious people like it.

Disco should definitely look alot hipper. Not that I like disco but it definitely was not bland.

so sad :[ idk whats wrong with these guys, but i love the concept and i love the disco_ 5$

At first glance I thought the guy kneeling was frankenstein, and I wondered why he would be upset about the death of disco. Maybe make his hair a little less square so there is less resemblance? Or maybe it is just me.

I agree, I thought he was Frankenstein's monster. Not only his head shape, looks so pale.

" Disco should definitely look alot hipper. Not that I like disco but it definitely was not bland." Cassanova_Frankenstein

True. Shouldn't his clothing or hair or something suggest something about disco? Instead he looks like Frankenstein Elvis.

its amazing the way it is.
id buy it.!