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KEMMLER
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by KEMMLER
Hi, not much time to leave a description now, will do so later.
KEMMLER
KEMMLER on Jul 29 '05
Ok, looks like this JUST went up, so here's the real description. Anway, don't take the title to mean anything much- this is supposed to be a really generally allegorical design, not about 'revolution' or 'fighting the man' specificially. (although those are certainly valid interpretations.) When I first started this design I wanted the meaning to be broad- it could be as far-fetched as someone taking control of their eating and losing weight. I don't know. Quitting smoking-- this can represent any experience involving a struggle.

The colors can be whatever- just vote for your favorite via comments. Also, there have been several blogs in my profile about this one. If you want to see a larger version, go to my profile and check it out. Please, again note that the background color is not important, really. Mainly I think light blue and khaki are the best though. If this one doesn't make it I'm going to tweak and tweak, so comments are appreciated! Thanks everyone and please vote thoughtfully.
slacktents
slacktents on Jul 29 '05
Sweet. I like the dark blue.
CanadianPunk
CanadianPunk on Jul 29 '05
Honestly I think it's a fantastic design.
I'd been waiting for you to submit this since waaaaaaaay back a couple months ago when you first posted the idea in the blog forum.
I love the message behind it.
Not sure I like the placement too too much, seems kind of off to me for some reason... maybe if the hand was more towards the top corner?
4 thumbs up
pinkerton
pinkerton on Jul 29 '05
I'll take one in Khaki.
kevindujour
   kevindujour on Jul 29 '05
I do not like how it is two colors- black and white on whatever shirt they'd choose.

I really think that the hand should be a flesh tone and the figure a wood tone.
PATRICKwMORGAN
PATRICKwMORGAN on Jul 29 '05
Kemmler, I think that this is my favorite design that I've seen by you since I've been here. Of course, toilet girl was a close second. As for the design itself, I think that the strings dangling and on the ground are fantastic. Congrats!
schaghticoke_ndn
schaghticoke_ndn on Jul 29 '05
I like the thought put into the idea... not a cliche design at all, however, I think it is too empty... so much canvas, so little art... perhaps putting a stage in the background will enhance the design( and even a touch of color or a duotone). Don't take this a a bad critique... it is a critique which I rarely give to 99.9% of the stuff posted on this site. Keep on truckin.
trixi
trixi on Jul 29 '05
$5
RaeKuusou
RaeKuusou on Jul 29 '05
definitly a good idea, and the puppet is really well done.....but the severed floating hand bugs me, and unfortunatley i don't have any good tips on how to fix it.
Chicky6898
Chicky6898 on Jul 29 '05
I sooooooooooooo want to buy this - right now! Can I buy this right now? Great job!
roflcopter
roflcopter on Jul 29 '05
It would be cool if it was on grey
roflcopter
roflcopter on Jul 29 '05
Oh, and really awesome design
bramble
bramble on Jul 30 '05
I really love the design and how it's so open to interpretation. Khaki looks really nice and I really liked kevindujour's color suggestions.
I love it. $5
exiiittt
exiiittt on Jul 30 '05
The design is really great, I'd buy it fo shiz. Some constructive criticism: the design should be off centre?
MoniqueH
MoniqueH on Jul 30 '05
Corner. Grey or red would be nice.
orangehat5
orangehat5 on Jul 30 '05
great design. I would like to see the hand way up in the corner more, but I'd buy as is. too perfect.

5$
bigpig
bigpig on Jul 30 '05
dark blue. i like it 5$
KEMMLER
KEMMLER on Jul 30 '05
Also, remember that this shirt is a reminder of scarface's hard lessons- you must TAKE respect! just another interpretation for y'all.
KEMMLER
KEMMLER on Jul 30 '05
um, see my profile for a chrome 3d version if you want.
Thickblueink
Thickblueink on Jul 30 '05
respect indeed. and a ton of it to you, kemmler.
babyitsromance
babyitsromance on Jul 31 '05
I love it on pink.
Lindseybird
Lindseybird on Jul 31 '05
Everyone can relate to this we all have something we want to take back control of in our lives. I would buy this for sure if printed : )
bradicalz
bradicalz on Jul 31 '05
i love it , black t_shirt with red puppet strings would look amazing me thinkz. then i would buy it
rudra
rudra on Aug 01 '05
i really like the idea, but something about the execution is bugging me-

i think color as kevindujour said for the hand and puppet would help.

there also seems to be too much empty space - maybe you could enlarge the whole image, and increase the angle between the hand and the puppet so it increases the tension and stretches the image across the tee farther, and place the hand higher up in the corner.
plastic taxi cab
plastic taxi cab on Aug 01 '05
This shirt is amazing. I prefer it on dark blue. 5$
JohnHanauer
JohnHanauer on Aug 01 '05
Excellent final product. It really shows you've been working to fine tune this. Even if threadless doesn't print this one, you're going to need to put it somewhere else so I can have/wear one.

I'd say ignore the flesh colored suggestions above, for obvious reasons (well, maybe not obvious, but you'd lose a lot of feasible shirt colors if you went with a flesh colored foreground). Besides, if you made the hand flesh, you wouldn't be able to stop there. You'd have to make the handle brown, the puppet tan, etc. I think stick with the whites.

Fantastic work. 5/5 I'd buy it.

-J skrillz.
samadhi46
samadhi46 on Aug 01 '05
could use some coloring. seems a bit too flat with jsut black and white as it is. maybe some cross hatching (if its allowed)
KEMMLER
KEMMLER on Aug 01 '05
it's not allowed, I think. I'm thinking of changing the placement of the hand (as in profile) to make it a little... denser?
jayseeca
jayseeca on Aug 01 '05
i woul dlike it if the image was quite larger... and took up more of the t-shirt
B_true
B_true on Aug 01 '05
i love this!!! i think its a great idea and it's really well depicted. if the image was a bit larger and further up, the hand might seem better placed. either way i like it and i want it, probably on the salmon color or the light blue.
wild_thang
wild_thang on Aug 01 '05
OOO! I love it! :D
a 5 and a buy! :)
Oh Starry Dynamo
Oh Starry Dynamo on Aug 02 '05
Absolutely brilliant.
Oh Starry Dynamo
Oh Starry Dynamo on Aug 02 '05
$5. ;)
tjart
tjart on Aug 02 '05
my suggestions:

loose the floating dismemberd hand all together. the hand is much bigger than s/he is and therefore represents another person/power out of the puppet's control. the cross is already part of the puppet, so without the hand it'd be easy to see the puppet as fighting itself. this would also have the nice side effect of letting you place the cross anywhere, so it could be a horizontal design rather than a diagonal one, though I don't know if that would be an improvement.

also, it feels flat: you have 4 colors, I'd suggest using a 3rd (grey) to add shadows to the paper puppet and *maybe* a 4th (light grey) to add a little wood grain (or chrome lines or whatever).

and last, it feels lopsided: center the design as a whole on the shirt, not the puppet centerd and the hand to the left. to clarify the strings would be in the center of the shirt, puppet to the right, cross to the left, like a boxing ring (...and in this corner).

I like khaki and dark blue.
jwitte84
jwitte84 on Aug 02 '05
I'd uuse color on the hand and the figure.
nightdrive
nightdrive on Aug 02 '05
i like it best on pink or navy. i really like it, and how it relates to a wide variety of things. great job.
wilder
wilder on Aug 02 '05
I really like the idea behind this shirt, and the generic looking puppet works well.
makeit
makeit on Aug 02 '05
i love and would wear the idea but i do not like the tee collor choices.
reezunz
reezunz on Aug 04 '05
It doesn't matter color or whatever the design rocks, i really like it.
moondripper
moondripper on Aug 04 '05
Can I order one of these on light blue, please?
pvb
pvb on Aug 04 '05
5+$. dark blue.
coegirl78
coegirl78 on Aug 04 '05
Very nice. I would prefer that the graphic be just a little bigger.
5+$ on dark blue.
elbow grease
elbow grease on Aug 05 '05
wwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
i mean it
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that is truly life changing
$5$5$5
elbow grease
elbow grease on Aug 05 '05
the gaint hand is a lefty so watch out
KEMMLER
KEMMLER on Aug 05 '05
yeah- INTERESTING FACT: both of my parents are lefties. Does this shirt maybe signify some deep internal struggle going on in my mind? Uh.... I don't think so?
causticexe
causticexe on Aug 05 '05
PERFECT.

And I've definitely never said that about a shirt before.

<3
KEMMLER
KEMMLER on Aug 05 '05
Hmm... 2.8 ... not too disappointed but I'd rather have over a 3. I'm going to resubmit this with changes so don't worry... unless they wanna print it as is. Or just skip the 2nd submission.

-Alex
2 days later
MoniqueH
MoniqueH on Aug 07 '05
Who doesn't want over 3?
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