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fastjumper
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my first submission.hope you like it!
and i know you'll tell me honestly what you think about it!
;)
loglow
   loglow on Jul 28 '05
Ok, this has potential! A number of things...

The top of the pot seems too shallow, and comes accross as a little awkward--needs some tweakage.

Also, the headphones aren't reading correctly, especially from a distance. It was a good idea to make them negative, but it doesn't work. It just looks like his head is a weird shape and too small. Try making them positive or a different color.

The burner that his hand is above is too small.

Also, remove the text, since the design speaks for itself.

Good work!
mjim
mjim on Jul 28 '05
not bad for a first submission! my only complaint is that the perspective on the pot seems off
urxdrawingsxrad
urxdrawingsxrad on Jul 29 '05
i definitly like the concept
quoperate
quoperate on Jul 29 '05
Good drawing, good idea. Would be So much better with a font with a bit of style, scaled down a couple sizes, and not so tight up next to the drawing. Ditto on mjim's comment. Keep it up!
Matt B
Matt B on Jul 29 '05
I like it but I dont think it needs text at all,....it might be cool if you made the burners spiral style
'|'urtle
'|'urtle on Jul 29 '05
nice concept. remove the text and fix the pot.
JAMAICABOLZ
JAMAICABOLZ on Jul 29 '05
fastjumper is my friend!

(all djs need this t-shirt)
mimi8
mimi8 on Jul 29 '05
Grande Erik!!!!!!
JAMAICABOLZ
JAMAICABOLZ on Jul 29 '05
barbuti per tutti
JAMAICABOLZ
JAMAICABOLZ on Jul 29 '05
ehy ho guardato gli altri designer:
son tutti dei CICCIONI - PALLE DI LARDO
... per giunta metallari! oh my god
fastjumper
   fastjumper on Jul 29 '05
dai mona! è una cosa seria
JAMAICABOLZ
JAMAICABOLZ on Jul 29 '05
anni fa ho partecipato pure io a sta cosa
avevo fatto votare tutti...amici e parenti
la cosa migliore è l'autoproduzione
e poi l'italiano non lo capisce nessuno!
countermovecrew
countermovecrew on Jul 29 '05
Miiiii! Vearmente forte sta majetta!
G R A N D I S S I M O !

....stampane qualcuna ciao!
VaranoDiKomodoProd
fastjumper
   fastjumper on Jul 29 '05
ouch.sorry for misspelling in the title and...sorry for talking italian(i love my friends but sometime id kill them...lol)
anyway, thanx a lot for your comments.
i know that most people here always would lose the text. in my case i think you are right when you say to make it smaller and lower, but i wouldnt lose it: i like to see texts and images working togheter.
heylizzie
heylizzie on Jul 29 '05
Smaller and darker for the text, if at all. I think in this case it's pretty much self-explanatory though, so it doesn't really need it.
bananaphone
   bananaphone on Jul 29 '05
good concept, pot is definately looking weird at a wrong angle though.
Sjaakennout
Sjaakennout on Jul 29 '05
Change the pot, and it is a 5er
bortwein
   bortwein on Jul 29 '05
No text and add a flame under the pot then you'd be golden. Or at least bronze.
i_twirl_batons
i_twirl_batons on Jul 29 '05
in orange. 4$
amandaelizabeth
amandaelizabeth on Jul 29 '05
I don't like the text.
drewster
drewster on Jul 29 '05
looks dangerous >_<
orangehat5
orangehat5 on Jul 29 '05
id buy as is. no need to change it.
monkeyflung
monkeyflung on Jul 29 '05
concept = 5+,
could use tweakage (the pot, headphone, all said previously) but i the idea is 10x awesome.
TEH BIOTCH
TEH BIOTCH on Jul 29 '05
fuck ing rad.

5 dolla holla
Superchumbo
Superchumbo on Jul 29 '05
Loving it !!

Might possibly like it more without the text but ill give it a 5 nonetheless !!

$5
boonos
boonos on Jul 30 '05
lose the text and id buy it... 5++++
bigpig
bigpig on Jul 30 '05
music IS everywhere
nicholasxw
nicholasxw on Jul 30 '05
teh sex. 5$
Robsoul
   Robsoul on Jul 30 '05
lose the type, that's pretty funny, I dig it.
matahijau
matahijau on Jul 30 '05
cool idea; i agree with the others that the text needs to go. let it speak for itself!
babyitsromance
babyitsromance on Jul 31 '05
Remove the text.
I love it though.
Dust!
Dust! on Jul 31 '05
ok, togli il testo e spediscimela, quanti iuro vuoi?

don't keep silent too long.
Dust!
Dust! on Jul 31 '05
il colore migliore è quello dello sfondo.
fastjumper
   fastjumper on Jul 31 '05
hey dust! i smoke and drink too (and i talk english in an international forum ;))
please be patient, wait the running finish and we'll see!
cheers
tohappiness
tohappiness on Aug 01 '05
I think it would be better if the font were different. Otherwise I think it's pretty cool.
B_true
B_true on Aug 01 '05
I like what it says, Im not going to ask you to get rid of the text because if this shirt had to have text on it, this is the perfect thing to say and i think that's cool. so yeah. (;
laurelxcore
laurelxcore on Aug 01 '05
Aw, this is awesome. Only complaints (which hvae been said) the headphones, size of the burner, and the pot .

Suggestion for the pot - maybe have just a line where it opens up, so show depth.

Reminds me of an iPod comercial.
Spip
Spip on Aug 02 '05
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!! 5!
nightdrive
nightdrive on Aug 02 '05
i don't think the text should be on it, but i think the design is wonderful. i like it best on yellow. great job.
linkpalmer
linkpalmer on Aug 02 '05
Awesome, I'd buy it
rinzii
rinzii on Aug 02 '05
AHHHHGHHH!

my HANDS!
they are burning!
damn you!!!

hehehe.
like the concept!
makeitallokay
makeitallokay on Aug 02 '05
One word = Ouch.
anath3ma
anath3ma on Aug 02 '05
I'd like it better without the text.
Tasman001
Tasman001 on Aug 03 '05
The size and angles on the pot and the burner below his hand need to be fixed, plus lose the text. 3 now, with those changes it would be a 5.
gregerOne
gregerOne on Aug 03 '05
yes. Loo-oo-oose the text
fastjumper
   fastjumper on Aug 03 '05
k. got it! ill resubmit this design with some improvement.
meanwhile, thanx to all for comments ;)
ciao
SleepyWriter
SleepyWriter on Aug 03 '05
scrumtrulecent!! 5$
makruege
makruege on Aug 03 '05
This concept was submitted last week with a woman spinning on a washing machine. It was titled "Spin Cycle."

Check it out:
http://www.threadless.com/submission/48601/spin_cycle

It looks awesome and I apreciate the design, but I am afraid that it is a "spinoff" of someone else's recent work.

PS I like yours better but its sorta not your idea.
fastjumper
   fastjumper on Aug 03 '05
hey sir makruege, BEFORE TALKING go to check the date of the first comment of that design...and then come back and check the date of the first comment of my design...
(if thats not enogh, i can tell you that i did this design a while before to submit it...you know, it took me a little bit of time..)

>:(
fastjumper
   fastjumper on Aug 03 '05
if the date is not an evidence, consider that: when you send a file to thredless, it need 4-8 days to be approved: how in the hell could we (me and malsi) have seen our works wich are running togheter and have been submitted almost in the same moment ???
BEFORE TALKING please be informed
reezunz
reezunz on Aug 04 '05
I pretend to be a DJ on my stove every morning.
reezunz
reezunz on Aug 04 '05
The pot is not right though.
43 days later
whiteshadow
whiteshadow on Sep 16 '05
I don't know about the text, but the man in the picture really makes me smile and now every time I take a look at my stoves, I think at your t-shirt! It's really crazy, I like it so much!
23 days later
phosphodae
phosphodae on Oct 09 '05
FANTASTIC, would buy, except the headphones take a chunk out of his head; define the outside edge and you've got yourself a shirt.

Oh, and kill the text. It's totally unnecessary, detracts from the point, and just comes off as overkill.

Other than that, LOVE it.
226 days later
Scorpionxm
Scorpionxm on May 24 '06
Dunno who was first, but I got a photo of the same concept..
DJ with in kitchen with headphones.. :P
Nice done btw :)
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