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loglow on Jul 28 '05 Ok, this has potential! A number of things...
The top of the pot seems too shallow, and comes accross as a little awkward--needs some tweakage. Also, the headphones aren't reading correctly, especially from a distance. It was a good idea to make them negative, but it doesn't work. It just looks like his head is a weird shape and too small. Try making them positive or a different color. The burner that his hand is above is too small. Also, remove the text, since the design speaks for itself. Good work! |
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not bad for a first submission! my only complaint is that the perspective on the pot seems off
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i definitly like the concept
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Good drawing, good idea. Would be So much better with a font with a bit of style, scaled down a couple sizes, and not so tight up next to the drawing. Ditto on mjim's comment. Keep it up!
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I like it but I dont think it needs text at all,....it might be cool if you made the burners spiral style
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nice concept. remove the text and fix the pot.
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fastjumper is my friend!
(all djs need this t-shirt) |
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Grande Erik!!!!!!
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barbuti per tutti
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ehy ho guardato gli altri designer:
son tutti dei CICCIONI - PALLE DI LARDO ... per giunta metallari! oh my god |
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fastjumper on Jul 29 '05 dai mona! è una cosa seria
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anni fa ho partecipato pure io a sta cosa
avevo fatto votare tutti...amici e parenti la cosa migliore è l'autoproduzione e poi l'italiano non lo capisce nessuno! |
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Miiiii! Vearmente forte sta majetta!
G R A N D I S S I M O ! ....stampane qualcuna ciao! VaranoDiKomodoProd |
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fastjumper on Jul 29 '05 ouch.sorry for misspelling in the title and...sorry for talking italian(i love my friends but sometime id kill them...lol)
anyway, thanx a lot for your comments. i know that most people here always would lose the text. in my case i think you are right when you say to make it smaller and lower, but i wouldnt lose it: i like to see texts and images working togheter. |
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Smaller and darker for the text, if at all. I think in this case it's pretty much self-explanatory though, so it doesn't really need it.
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bananaphone on Jul 29 '05 good concept, pot is definately looking weird at a wrong angle though.
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Change the pot, and it is a 5er
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bortwein on Jul 29 '05 No text and add a flame under the pot then you'd be golden. Or at least bronze.
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in orange. 4$
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I don't like the text.
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looks dangerous >_<
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id buy as is. no need to change it.
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concept = 5+,
could use tweakage (the pot, headphone, all said previously) but i the idea is 10x awesome. |
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fuck ing rad.
5 dolla holla |
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Loving it !!
Might possibly like it more without the text but ill give it a 5 nonetheless !! $5 |
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lose the text and id buy it... 5++++
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music IS everywhere
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teh sex. 5$
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Robsoul on Jul 30 '05 lose the type, that's pretty funny, I dig it.
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cool idea; i agree with the others that the text needs to go. let it speak for itself!
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Remove the text.
I love it though. |
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ok, togli il testo e spediscimela, quanti iuro vuoi?
don't keep silent too long. |
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il colore migliore è quello dello sfondo.
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fastjumper on Jul 31 '05 hey dust! i smoke and drink too (and i talk english in an international forum ;))
please be patient, wait the running finish and we'll see! cheers |
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I think it would be better if the font were different. Otherwise I think it's pretty cool.
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I like what it says, Im not going to ask you to get rid of the text because if this shirt had to have text on it, this is the perfect thing to say and i think that's cool. so yeah. (;
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Aw, this is awesome. Only complaints (which hvae been said) the headphones, size of the burner, and the pot .
Suggestion for the pot - maybe have just a line where it opens up, so show depth. Reminds me of an iPod comercial. |
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niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice!! 5!
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i don't think the text should be on it, but i think the design is wonderful. i like it best on yellow. great job.
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Awesome, I'd buy it
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AHHHHGHHH!
my HANDS! they are burning! damn you!!! hehehe. like the concept! |
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One word = Ouch.
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I'd like it better without the text.
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The size and angles on the pot and the burner below his hand need to be fixed, plus lose the text. 3 now, with those changes it would be a 5.
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yes. Loo-oo-oose the text
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fastjumper on Aug 03 '05 k. got it! ill resubmit this design with some improvement.
meanwhile, thanx to all for comments ;) ciao |
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scrumtrulecent!! 5$
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This concept was submitted last week with a woman spinning on a washing machine. It was titled "Spin Cycle."
Check it out: http://www.threadless.com/submission/48601/spin_cycle It looks awesome and I apreciate the design, but I am afraid that it is a "spinoff" of someone else's recent work. PS I like yours better but its sorta not your idea. |
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fastjumper on Aug 03 '05 hey sir makruege, BEFORE TALKING go to check the date of the first comment of that design...and then come back and check the date of the first comment of my design...
(if thats not enogh, i can tell you that i did this design a while before to submit it...you know, it took me a little bit of time..) >:( |
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fastjumper on Aug 03 '05 if the date is not an evidence, consider that: when you send a file to thredless, it need 4-8 days to be approved: how in the hell could we (me and malsi) have seen our works wich are running togheter and have been submitted almost in the same moment ???
BEFORE TALKING please be informed |
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I pretend to be a DJ on my stove every morning.
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The pot is not right though.
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I don't know about the text, but the man in the picture really makes me smile and now every time I take a look at my stoves, I think at your t-shirt! It's really crazy, I like it so much!
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FANTASTIC, would buy, except the headphones take a chunk out of his head; define the outside edge and you've got yourself a shirt.
Oh, and kill the text. It's totally unnecessary, detracts from the point, and just comes off as overkill. Other than that, LOVE it. |
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Dunno who was first, but I got a photo of the same concept..
DJ with in kitchen with headphones.. :P Nice done btw :) |
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