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RockStarNeil
I would appreciate any comments and constructive criticism!

*NOTE the flash buttons might be a tad messed up, but i'm sure you can navigate around just fine. ;-)
RockStarNeil
RockStarNeil on Jul 26 '05
and BTW...

to see the correct details, use the button....if u click-drag zoom on the small image, the strokes are messed up!

so just a warning :-)
redpanic
redpanic on Jul 26 '05
good choice of colors.
I'd wear it.
finkenstein
   finkenstein on Jul 26 '05
I like.
atomicjustice
atomicjustice on Jul 26 '05
Looks great $5
causticexe
causticexe on Jul 26 '05
I love it over blue.
kissmeimcontagious
kissmeimcontagious on Jul 27 '05
black && blue rules!
Audiowhore
Audiowhore on Jul 27 '05
ah this is what you talked about? well in my eyes it could be more details ( the tank and "the thing the font is in") excuse my bad english agai n;)

black is best though
RockStarNeil
RockStarNeil on Jul 27 '05
yea the banner could use a little work...

any more suggestions people???
athorpedo
athorpedo on Jul 28 '05
As someone said, the banner could use some work. Not the whole banner itself, really, but just the text. The font you chose was a good choice, but the text seems so crowded on it. Maybe go with something more spacious and simpler.

The overall execution is excellent, though. I especially like the contrast between the two images--The tank and bomber being shown with finer detail and thin lines, while the hearts with thick lines and more "friendly" looking, if you will.
bethm
bethm on Jul 28 '05
i think it looks really ugly-the design as a whole is too busy-too many bombs, too many hearts and the stealth aircraft too should go-not too fond of the symmetry of the overall design either or the colors or the font choice-sorry
hoorah
hoorah on Jul 28 '05
I don't like the color choices.
the red seems to look bad with everything.
drewster
drewster on Jul 29 '05
i think the tank should have some black in it so it doesnt seem like it blends into everything but i like the design and concept
RockStarNeil
RockStarNeil on Jul 29 '05
Ok thanks everybody for the comments
So from what you all have told me, I need to work on:

-the banner
-Color schemes
-Not as many bombs?

Beth: I have no intention of taking out the bomber. Maybe I'll re-position it, but it is a vital part of the design.
Hoorah: If red doesnt go with any of those colors, what would YOU suggest?

Any other comments?
m0onshine
m0onshine on Jul 30 '05
very cute.
$5
BadLlamaMan
BadLlamaMan on Jul 31 '05
awesome i think brown and black are best! 5
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