Benjamin Traded in His Kite
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Jul 26 '05
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oh RLY?
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bortwein on Jul 26 '05 This is cute, but the layout seems a bit odd. Maybe if Ben was standing on the Kite and the string was more in circles on the ground than how straight it is now.
I like your clouds and plane. |
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j might actually just drop the kite. it would be funny w/ just ben and the plane. this is cool, especially since my mom is a historian....hehe.
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I vote for the yellow shirt's design.
The light blue shirt's colors don't have the same impact as the yellow shirt or the red ink on the dark blue. The dark blue shirt's design draws my eye first to the red kite and then to Ben's red jacket , & then it barely made it to the plane in the sky. The yellow shirt makes it real easy for me to see all the elements of the design. So the little plane really stands out on the yellow shirt. |
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to SRT10:
Someone left a great idea on your " You Stole My Girl " design. Gothnoo said, " you should fix it up and submit it to semipermanent loves threadless ". |
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thanks for all the comments so far, keep em coming.
helo, yeah thanks, i was actually thinking about doing that... |
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Kinda too big.
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Perfect size, keep the kite, yellow and dark blue look best.
I love this! Please, please print it, Threadless! |
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I love it. The yellow looks great, but I think you need to cut out the kite altogether. Anyways, great job.
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i think that frankling and the kite should be smaller in relation to the clouds, but i like the concept and the design. well done.
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Nice concept, though I always think of the 1776 Franklin with his tiny glasses...
Cloud detail is good too. Lots of sky designs lately, it seems... but this is an amusing one. |
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Skipper6745 on Jul 27 '05 I'd buy it on yellow.
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Skipper6745 on Jul 27 '05 er...denim I mean.
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I want franklin in those tiny reading glasses!
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here's the revised version...glasses and some other changes..
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b264/jtarin/fraknlinrealrevised.jpg |
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$5 & I'd buy it. I absolutely LOVE this. Especially in yellow.<3
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$5
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yellow. yes.
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Awesome
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I *adore* this design. I love how it takes up the entire shirt, it's beautiful. I really hope this gets printed!!
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5$
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thanks again for all the comments...
and if you didn't see from above, here's the updated version http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b264/jtarin/fraknlinrealrevised.jpg |
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hahaha! good choice bengimen!
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navy blue! $ 5
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I LOVE IT!!!! 5$ o how i hope you win.
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cute!!! Love it! 5$
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I am digging this shirt. Jumping on the $5 bandwagon.
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thanks guys!
5$ :) |
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hahahaha! i'd buy it! the blue is beautiful! the idea is great. nice job! $5!
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Yes, please! 5$
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pseudonymjones on Aug 02 '05 I love the design so far (even more so with the new kite placement) but I am thinking there needs to be a key on a string tied to the back of the plane.
See, he'd be doing the electrical experiments he is renowned for with a device that already runs on electricity! |
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i like that idea pseudonym!
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