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Like the concept, would it not be better to change GraFx Station to SP05, Then but actual copy for Lincoln center and dates.......
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I'll say, please don't tell me that's Arial, which is NOT Helvetica.
The concept's very good, otherwise. |
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yeah, I have to say the typography needs to be spot on for this to work. like the concept though. Agree with Vish, maybe change the copy.
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yeah, i agree with loglow -- this is a clever idea, but it seems a bit too in the "404 error shirt - nerdery" category.
but just CMYK in the metro circles would be pretty sweet. |
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this is one of the hardest things to pull off well, because you are working with the core elements of graphic design. Try again, this just doesn't work.
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here a version w/o text :
http://shmoopafly.free.fr/grafx-station2.gif u can leave coments ont that. thanks :) |