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 Well, it\\\'s a bottle, with an angry thingie in it! :)
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HAHAHAHAHA! He's so cute! 5!
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ha! awesome. PRINT IT.
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Good idea but the bottle is too long. Make the bottle shorter and then I might buy it.
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i love the design, but i agree with SporadicEnigma's comment. for a t-shirt chest design it looks a bit too long. but i'm biased, i 'm not particularly a flat-chested boy. no, i don't have a smoking problem that led to manboobs. but yeah, so long amd narrow designs don't really look good on a) men with manboobs and b)women from a to d in my personal experience.
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oh and the concept is awesome. make some for your local "coder" in a non-management position.
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hehe, he's so cute!
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muahah its adorable. BUT. long designs don't look good on girls or guys with manboobs i guess. but definitely NOT on girls. i wouldnt wear it just cuz its long.
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This is great! I agree with the other comments though make the picture smaller and off to one of the sides and I will buy one for sure! : )
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as a girl with boobs, i gotta agree. people get a crick in their neck trying to read stuff that's below the timberline, or you have to hold out your shirt which is annoying.
i love the concept but i don't like the words on it (and i usually love words!) i just don't think they're necessary in this case. just a bottle with a little angry dude in it would suffice. the thought bubble works though. |
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make it smaller - make the text look more like a a bottle label.
not sure about the @*#! balloon being off the bottle though- it makes the premise of the design seem kind of muddled and confused, considerring how plain the little angry dude in/on the bottle looks |
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Hey! I was thinking about making it smaller .. and perhaps change the design of the bottle (to put it above all kinds of boobs). There isn't a chance I can do that during it's in the running, is it? Can you do minor modifications assuming you'd win, before it prints? Well. Thanks for all the awesome comments! Makes you see what needs to be improved. Kepp on commenting and I'll be SO HAPPY! :)
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What I would suggest doing, Will, is making the modifications then upload the design to a photo hosting site such as http://www.imageshack.us and link to the image in the comments so other people can check it out.
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Hey everyone! I've redesigned the bottle! I hope you like it! Please tell me what you think though!
http://www.wbdn.se/Bottled_Anger.gif |
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Another suggestion at: http://www.wbdn.se/Bottled_Anger2.gif
This one has a transparent bottle. |
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awwssoommee.
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Aww, now it's in a little video game potion bottle. Like it with the label.
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the revised bottle is an improvement from the first. the red is looking a wee bit washed out though. it reminds me of salmon instead of an angry emotion.
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what if the bottle read: HATERADE
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redpanic: The point of the shirt was to illustrate the state of "bottled up anger" meaning supressed anger .. and there is a reworked version of the bottle at the addresses above. Thx anyway!
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fine I'm blind.
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great idea, it makes a simple fun t-shirt
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it's off senter it! but it's funny.
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simplyeca: All minor flaws will be taken care of in the second run. IF it wins.
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Wicked design, simple but effective
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nice concept but illustrations needs work
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i'd drink it
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I won't drink it.
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I want some
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Thanks for all the comments mates! This obviously wasn't good enough. We'll see how I'll do in the next run. THANKS!
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It's just unneccesarily big. and the bottle is funny shaped.
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