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This is pretty good except for the fact that the cars wouldnt be flying off of the loop like that. Theyd be on the inside of it in real life.
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I like the placements in this one better, and the cloud with "the", but I really liked the scribbly hand-drawn style of the other one better, and the terrified little people in the car.
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Nice but I'm having a really hard time seeing "pit". I think you should make it a little more obvious since the "the" is so obvious.
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Does that say something? cause if it does, I can't read it. Also the 'the' is awkward considering its so clean when everythign else is really fluid.
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LOVE IT! and the colors are great, don't change a thing.
Isn't it good if 'pit' is difficult to read? Gives a good excuse for someone to come a little closer. |
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Yes, "pit" is hard to read. And unless you knew what it was supposed to say, you can't quite tell that "beyond" is what it is.
Otherwise, I like the colors, and the flying cars. |
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What score did you get...ahhhh the suspense is killing me. It better be good cause this is a WINNER.
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