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 Eisley "Room Noises"
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nice.
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i really like the idea, but i just feel like we get a little carried away with the music notes, i don't know it's just a little much. and khaki, aside from me already hating it, doesn't do much for the design. nice work though.
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yeah, the electric blue and khaki aren't very complementary
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i like. 5
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too many music notes, but I love the idea
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ah! i love it so much don't change anything!
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yes, nins45, i agree completely!
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i luv it!
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Circulating sound? I like it!
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i like the idea but it looks too plain and i dont like the shirt color 3
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I don't like the fact that all the notes are in the same orientation. If the fan is blowing them around helter skelter, they should be at different angles... no?
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i agree and i think you need to consult your color wheel
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last time I checked, khaki (tan) was a neutral and didn't make it on my color wheel. But it is generally closer to yellows and oranges in the spectrum, which happen to be compliments of blue.
After you graduate highschool and take some color theory courses, get back to me on consulting a color wheel. |
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I love it, except for the shirt color. Its just, kinda wierd
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I don't like how uniform the music notes are. Try switching up sizes, etc. I love the fan.
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I would also take the shadows off the notes, rotate some of them, and have them swirling around the fan so your idea is a little clearer. I like the blue and tan together though.
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I made the notes more random and rotated them....It made a big difference and looks better. I re_submitted, but I'm not sure if it will get posted or not. in any case, you can check it out here.
www.bwjdesign.com/eisley_shirt.jpg also, let me know about the Eisley logo* |
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i liked it but before i saw t was for eisley i was like "wtf, fans can make noises?" 4
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i really like all this room noises stuff.
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I like it alot, great job. :)
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Great colors.
Nice job. |
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Wow, I really like it a lot. Can't improve on perfection: 5 (i'd buy it too).
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Not so kean on the pun mabye its because english and its yanky thing. Not really sure about it to be honest
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what pun? not understanding the "yanky" language must be a foreign thing.
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like the design, but what kind of colors would you print on. the kakhi doesn't do much for it.
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really good shirt
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.REVISED.
www.bwjdesign.com/eisley_shirt.jpg |
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Oh, This is a good one. Reminds me of the rhythms you can make by putting your finger in the fan blades...*imagines everyone getting up to try it*
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Reminds me of sophomore design crits - all of the energy is put into conceptual thinking (which still needs another two years of refining), while style and aesthetics are unnecessarily demeaned. Fine solution for "Room Noises," but does anyone really want to wear it?
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oh shit yes I love it. Perfec.t
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garbage.
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too many notes, and the fan is so very photoshopped.
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