Hello I am Graham, and this is my first submission to Threadless.com!I wanted to make a picture of the things that make noise in the night. I hope that Eisley picks this one because I really like there music.



Graham R.

Since this is your first submission, I'm going to go relatively easy on you.

One, the font is a no no.

Two, the drawing a little meh to me.

Three, the rectangle is unneeded.

Four, the whole design is extremely amature.

Sorry, try again.



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i agree with everything stuck with pins said. it doesn't relate to eisley at all. yes, the cd is called room noises, but this picture doesn't capture any of the feelings the cd portrays

hey eth it's me Ray/Dark Mar. it's pretty cool. I think these guyz r just bein bloody critics lol. It looks cool

yeah, way too harsh in my opinion. i don't know the band so i don't know if the image applies, but i like the graffic, although i'm never a fan of text on shirts. unless it's absolutely necessary, but i think the image conveys the idea without the text.

well, i get what you all are sayin about the desing, and theres nothing i can realy do now as its over for this one.



"i agree with everything stuck with pins said. it doesn't relate to eisley at all. yes, the cd is called room noises, but this picture doesn't capture any of the feelings the cd portrays"



i would like to say that it dose have to do with the CD, as the Song "Telescope Eyes" is all about "BEING AFRAID OF THINGS IN YOUR HOUSE AT NIGHT" haha



i think that it covers the Theme of Room Noises, and it also has to do with one of the best songs (in my openion)on the CD



"Its about... kinda about being afraid of things in your house at night but... you know... trying to learn not to care about 'em, and trying to get over your fear of 'em" -Sherri DuPree-



haha



well i can realy do anything like i said... Back to the Drawing board.



Graham R.

I think it is cool! :)

Yeah me too..wish i could do that

is that Copperplate? The only thing worse is Papyrus. I really love type shirts...but only when the typography is done well. Don't tackle something too big on your first try. Type on a shirt is difficult to pull off well. The idea does coincide with Eisley's video for Telescope eyes, but the rendering is a little rough. Don't give up.

lose the type . . . lose the rectangle . . . lose the hallway.



keep the window, closet and underbed monsters. put the kid in the bed showing only his/her eyes.



otherwise, it's a good visual.

quodlibetor shhhh dont talk. if you dont know the band, and dont know if the design relates to it, then what good is your opinion? great, you like the shirt, big effin whoop, it doesnt matter. if you dont know the band, dont talk.