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i do like how the character is drawn
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The lemon doesn't look like a lemon. It looks like a deformed lightbulb. And the words should be part of the art, not just a textbox. I mean, come ON, you can try harder!
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I love this even more because I'm Very alergic to Lemons
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Allergic to lemons? I have never heard of that. What happens?
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Argh, Comic Sans font! Whyyyy?
And it's spelt "laser", because it's an acronym for Light Amplification by Stimulated Emission of Radiation. And why'd you randomly capitalised the nouns in the phrase? We're not speaking German. Although you did capitalise a verb as well. That makes even less sense. Basically, what I'm trying to say is, the design is kind of a good concept, but it needs to be better executed. |
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the text most definately should not be there, in my opinion
otherwise, i like it... the lemon does need some work though |
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Well i dunno it's not comic sans
i purposely didn't use it because for some reason it really pisses people off and who really cares how lazer is spelled maybe in the future when they start making lazer guns they will spell it "lazer" simply because it is hip and the future is obviously hip. |
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why is the lemon made of glass?
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If life gives me lemons, I am gonna EAT THEM...AND EAT THEIR CHILDREN...
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AWWWW!!! COMIC SAAAAANS! NOOOOOOOO!!!
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I think it would be niftier without the text too... And maybe the futuristic weapon instantly vaporizes the lemon juice into oblivion. Or something like that. I'm not an expert in futuristic alien space weaponry. Or maybe it *is* a glass lemon. Without text, it's left for the *viewer* to decide. No text = more mysterious.
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at last, the rev. way of making lemon ade, but make the lemon at the least a bit more round, and yeah whats with the random capitolizations?... id buy it for 5
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try a different font. comic sans just doesn't quite fit it.
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okay yes ,
i certainly agree now down with the font and it capatilization crazyness maybe i will make it so the words come from peices of the exploded lemon but thank you for the input |
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i, for one, like it
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I don't like the font at all.
You know, I would just take out the text altogether. The art is pretty okay, though. |
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i really like the idea, and the art. prolly could do with better font and spelling.
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mepushingbuttons on Jul 01 '05 if that font's good enough for 360,000 geocities pages, it's good enough for me.
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Really funny line, but very poorly executed.
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agree with Chosen
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You owe Brak and Cartoon Network $20. LAME, you get nothing for ganking. The Brak Show deserves better.
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Man I am getting murdered
you guys are intense and what about cartoon network? why 20 dollars whats ganking |
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i hate that font.
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better without the text. I like the style tho
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I really like the idea, and would probably but the shirt if the text were fixed up a bit to better blend with the style
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holy shit and my mom told me to eat a lemon today.. :)
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haha "eat your damn lemons"...um. i don't have a problem with the shirt. hats off for the design i dig it. the color of the shirt....eh i just don't like it...but other than that i give it a 3.
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I don't like the art for the guy and Laser has an s.
The concept is something I could see working with a redesign though. |
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^ i always thought "lazer" was spelled with a Z..
It's a fun idea. |
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i like lemons. and that idea. :)
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i kinda like that laser cannon part...if it was spelt right
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awsome. different font would be better though.
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HAHA! hilarious!
in a good way. |
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Lose the text, but I really like everything else about it.
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shut up and eat your damn lemons.