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Perhaps if you would like to include the text, you can incorporate it witha speach bubble above the rodent's head. Right now it just looks like a caption that doesn't make a whole lot of sense.
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i think the text should just be "yarr" and be small up by the rat's head....doesn't have to be in a speech bubble, but should look like its being spoken.
cute though! |
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it's cute, but the picture is a bit... well i can't say blurry because it's not exactly that. good job on the design though
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Haha! I didn't get the pun at first it's AWFUL. The pun.
I like the pun, but pirates are so overused now, you know? |
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pirates and rats.. two of my favourite things. not sure about it on a t-shirt though.
would probably buy it in HUGE and wear it to bed though. ;) |
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Not even joking, last night I found "Pierats ahoy" by richard scary in my basement, and I basically cried it made me so happy. This shirt is a personal fave of mine now. <3!
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i think its great the way it is... but i do like the idea of it just being "Yarr"
and don't put a speach bubble. its too common |
About my design
Constructive criticism welcome. :d