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Admit One

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Jun 24 '05
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by dantomlin
Admit One, hopefully you kids like this one. Be harsh if you must, tell me how much I suck, its the only way that I will be able to learn how to get better.
Trashcan
Trashcan on Jun 24 '05
can't fault the execution.
little_hobbit_feet
little_hobbit_feet on Jun 24 '05
I love the shirt, but it makes me seem like I'm a carnival ride.

Hm.
The Clam
The Clam on Jun 24 '05
I like it, but could you add any more color?
krebscout
krebscout on Jun 24 '05
yeah i really like it too, and i usually don't want to spend that much money on simple things. i like littlehobbitfeet's interpretation.
dantomlin
dantomlin on Jun 24 '05
Clam, I've used 4 colors on this, red, black, and two shades of blue. So unless threadless are going to make an exception, I think that more color wont happen ;)
man835
   man835 on Jun 24 '05
execution is great.
deadduck008
deadduck008 on Jun 24 '05
Would die for it on brown.
breakBEAUTYdownx
breakBEAUTYdownx on Jun 24 '05
I like it, but put it on a different colored shirt, and move the ticket down a little.
Uncle Martha
Uncle Martha on Jun 25 '05
My only hang-up is that the details under the text look too much like the jesus-fish stickers I see everywhere. Some other little flourish would be better in my opinion. Otherwise, I like it.
artswork
artswork on Jun 25 '05
Carnival ride? Seems good to me!
Kallen
Kallen on Jun 25 '05
I agree with Martha. Also move it down. I like the design, high quality. I'd like to see it on a brown shirt
DivineDreamer
DivineDreamer on Jun 26 '05
love the design. not so sure about it on the shirt.
joltnbolt
joltnbolt on Jun 27 '05
Love it... although I thought those were the jesus fish (which would make me not buy it)
Kamma
Kamma on Jun 27 '05
I like it a lot.
koo_koo_maroo
koo_koo_maroo on Jun 27 '05
nice artistic skills. maybe make the two ends look perforated, or alittle rough, like they were torn off. but yeah. nice job dude.
DeadlySauce
DeadlySauce on Jun 27 '05
perhaps an orange ticket? otherwise, on another color shirt

spicerguy
spicerguy on Jun 28 '05
ohh, this is a goooood shirt. I'd buy. But then again, I'm a film nut.
iamthor
iamthor on Jun 29 '05
Excellent design!
hoorah
hoorah on Jun 29 '05
I think it would look good near the bottom

because it's all crumpled up and stuff

it would look like someone dropped it
mr.ben
mr.ben on Jun 29 '05
The perspective is fantastic. Artwork is rendered in such a way that it reminds me of something. It's an achievement when you can evoke a feeling in a piece.
animlcrakraholc
animlcrakraholc on Jun 30 '05
i really like it, but the design scribles things look too much like jesus fish. other than that i would totally buy it
jtaro
jtaro on Jun 30 '05
Yea props/
SynthOrange
SynthOrange on Jun 30 '05
As other have said, the work on this is excellent. The subject matter though is... :|



You could add a few elements and have a great piece for the Beyond the Pit comp.
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