I've had this design idea for years now. Originally I imagined it on a full cream colored skirt, but what the heck, why not apply the idea to a tee.

a silouhette of an airplane?

are you serious?

this is just a webding.

you did absolutely no work.

boring. i got a tattoo of a 747 on my back, but now it is a hairier. get it?

cuz i'm hairy.

you had this idea...for YEARS? let me ask you, do you dream in color?

This is the idea that's been ruminating for "years"?

Yes a silhouette of an airplane.

Yes I'm serious.

No it is NOT a webding.

Yes it may be boring. I don't see it as boring. You're the one who tattooed a plane on your back.

Yes I dream in color.

Okay, a few years ago...whatever...



Let me clarify, I think I mentioned that I originally saw this design on a skirt. A large navy plane, stitched on a full cream colored skirt--kind of 50's style. I just transferred the idea to a tee, minus the stitching etc...I love airplanes, so I guess it was selfish to assume that someone else might too.

I actually like this, but it is way too easy to see this as an overly simple idea. I like it because it's clean, simple and devoid of text.



You will have to add something to this tho to get ppl sold on the idea. try maybe a cool background pattern in white (or same colour on same colour shirt) YOu'll have to to e tpl to vote this up.



I really find it attractive tho, so pls resub this

yawns...wheres the design?looks like its flown away.

Thanks Kallen!



I don't think I'm going to resubmit this one--I'd have to be a masochist to want this kind of feedback again.



I'm glad that SOMEONE understands what I was trying to go for (I know, I know, too simple, but YOU could see where I was going with it...)



If it was a robot roasting marshmellows I would have gotten all 5s, right??



Cheers,

motorama

especially if that robot was in love with his marshmellow and had lots of hearts floating around his head, and why not throw some birds in there too, just for the hell of it.



I think this design could work if you utilize two or three more colors. I would fore-shorten the airplane wings to give the design some interesting perspective, like you are looking from the side instead of looking down on it. Then add layers of color, maybe some highlights and some shadows. I also like Kallen's idea of using a background to jazz this one up.



I'm sorry these guys didn't have anything constructive to say. Don't hold it against them, they're morons.