Threadless T-Shirts - Royal

Royal - Tee by deseptic

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Submitted on:

Jun 20 '05

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31 comments

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2.14 out of 5

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Royal-Tee

My first design, it can come in any type of color, it only uses one color, if you don’t like it please tell me what I can do to improve it, I think the title says it all, went for a simple look, I used reference from a monogram book that I borrowed from my art teacher.

thank you!

:)

DoctaBu on Jun 20 '05

Awesome design, dude. I like it a lot. However, I think the placement could be just a bit better. Either lower it just a bit or center it.

AccidentaLove x on Jun 20 '05

love love love it. the placement could be better, but the center of the crest looks like a pocket. hehe

Greggeh on Jun 21 '05

Lovely design bro.

I agree with the other people who commented though. It doesnt feel balanced.

I would definitaly buy it though!

Treshe on Jun 21 '05

yes nice! like apocket would be great! maybe some other nice color combi's? like light green/drak green or ehh yellow on pink whatever :)

emsef on Jun 21 '05

very nice

chbeeston on Jun 21 '05

Sweet. don't change the placement, at least definitely don't center it. You could rotate it a little maybe? So that the crown was aligned vertically, and the rest of it is tilted? Ha, I'm actually having trouble picturing what it would look like, try it and see. Excellent job overall though.

wiretop on Jun 21 '05

very cool

deseptic on Jun 21 '05

thank you for your comments so far, ch beeston i tried that with the crown but it made it was not the feel i was going for, it would have looked too uniformed, ill try your idea , maybe i will do a re-design.

Treshe> this goes with any colors, i forgot to put in the other shirts, the design itself is only one color, yes i thought about green and yellow but i like blue better :P

Kerrn on Jun 21 '05

i think perhaps the outer section of the crest
the knight/flow-ee part seems a bit disproportionate to the shield part
plus it seems like the design is large enough to cover almost a whole boob.

maybe add more than just the crown to the center
so it looks a little less crown auto shape
and more like a real crest.

definite potential.

-k.

OMGAEKA on Jun 21 '05

I actually think it'd look nice on the bottom corner of the shirt. Left or right, I'm not sure. I love the design, though.

Kallen on Jun 21 '05

the scaling seems a bit too large for the design itself. I'm totally into cool crests, but this just isn't grabbing me

Cassanova_Frankenstein on Jun 22 '05

I might would buy it, but considering the placement shouldn't it be a bit smaller? I'm seeing it as something akin to like a little polo symble or such, I don't mean it has to be that small but it's that kinda thing I'm thinking.

MrWarren on Jun 22 '05

I LOVE THIS SHIRT IF IT DOSNT GET MADE IM GIVEING UP ON THIS SITE FOREVER !!!!! lol yep i whould sport it like a G

deseptic on Jun 22 '05

hmm now that i think about it you guys are right it should have been smaller and if this does go through i will talk to the people who will print this and ask them to make it smaller. if it doesnt go through, i will re-design this or touch it up, smaller, but my intentions were to make it to see the details i put into it. this t-shirt took me alot of time to make.

motorama on Jun 22 '05

DING DING DING--I think we've found a winner!! Great Job!

jer35 on Jun 22 '05

i'd buy it..just on a diff color shirt..how about red..white on red always looks good..and i like the placement ...4

jer35 on Jun 22 '05

actually now that I look at it closer..the design's not white its light blue/aqua..so maybe on a chocolate shirt? thats a hot combo i think

Derreko on Jun 22 '05

I like the positioning. a solid 4

deseptic on Jun 22 '05

thanks guys, i was going to add other t-shirt colors in but didnt for some reason, i was so excited, it basically works with any color since its only one color inked. good idea with the chocolate shirt jer.

thanks motorama, derreko

m1 on Jun 23 '05

i'd give you a buy if it was centered. just a five.

PetitePhilosophe on Jun 23 '05

I love the design, the pocket bit's cool, but I think the placement could be better. I'd center it, or maybe even stick it in a bottom corner. 5

2rde4rc on Jun 24 '05

FORGET ABOUT CENTERING IT. MAKE IT A POCKET TEE AND EVERYONE WILL SEE THAT IT IS GREATNESS......ALMOST.

mmhmichael on Jun 24 '05

make the crest look like a straight-up real life pocket and i'd buy it.

KEMMLER on Jun 25 '05

poop placement, what, did you make this drunk or something?

ugotserved on Jun 25 '05

it's a cool design, but it would probably be cooler to have the design in one of the lower corners. that's just my opinion. i'd still probably buy it though.

Farren on Jun 25 '05

I like it. It's simple yet intricate.

tesko on Jun 27 '05

Wow, if i knew this sort of stuff gets the threadless crew excited i would have submitted a million shirts by now. What else could go where the crown is?

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