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Krieg
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I\'m making the assumption that NJA is self explanatory. I wanted to add more of a glow to the sabre but the 4 color minimum with no shading kinda made that not possible. Yes... I know the logo thing is played out, but I still love it.
Krieg
Krieg on Jun 20 '05
Hit me hard I wanna hear all the negatives... a couple positives would be nice too. It's National Jedi Association... just incase you were gonna ask.
antimidas
antimidas on Jun 20 '05
When i first saw it i thought he was a ninja and NJA was short for it. but i now see the Jedi.
boyinbrown
boyinbrown on Jun 20 '05
i was going to ask...
i thought it might be the new jedi alliance.

i really like the idea!
Krieg
Krieg on Jun 20 '05
yeah I was gonna put National Jedi Association in small print under the NJA but I figured actually using the word "jedi" would hit on some copyright infringement issues.
man835
   man835 on Jun 20 '05
i thought it was ninja also...
gerpander
gerpander on Jun 20 '05
GJA - Galactic Jedi Association would give it a broader spectrum, but this really doesn't need the acronym at all.
kidv2
kidv2 on Jun 20 '05
he looks like a Jedi more than a ninja I think (maybe the saber)
Pifman
Pifman on Jun 20 '05
I thought ninja before I thought Jedi, but it doesn't really look like either one.
Krieg
Krieg on Jun 20 '05
I traced over a picture of Obi Wan, so it should look exactly like a jedi... but I guess it's just not a universal enough silhouette. And about the ninja thing, even if it looks like a ninja, is that a bad thing? I mean, for ninja fans you could just say it's a ninja instead of a jedi :)
delu
delu on Jun 20 '05
I too thought ninja even though I was a Star Wars geek years ag0. Maybe a more "Jedi-like" pose such as with one arm extended doing a force-push? It would probably still look too much like a ninja though. Perhaps if you used an alien Jedi instead for the head? If you use a Twi'lek, it should be fairly obvious to anyone familiar with the films.
Ninja-Bat
Ninja-Bat on Jun 20 '05
yeah i thought ninja too. but dude, if you pulled this off right it could be such a sick shirt. perhaps GJA real big witht he logo (better pose, not so ninja-y) and then underneat in smaller letters it you could spell out Galactic Jedi Association or whatever you decide for the name of the organization. this definatly has potentioal.
arexkun
arexkun on Jun 20 '05
I read "nja" as "ninja". A little confusing.
zerodette
zerodette on Jun 21 '05
Instead of the lighter blue along the lightsaber, color the saber itself. Deviates a bit from the red-white-blue logo idea, but should make the Jedi thing obvious.
Etchison
Etchison on Jun 21 '05
I thought "National Judo Association." The Light saber didn't exist at all until I saw the comments.
sliester
sliester on Jun 21 '05
I thought ninja upon fist sight too. Maybe make the sabre more obvious somehow. Also, something is wrong with his head, it looks like a helmet to me. I do like the idea, but i think it needs some refining.
Krieg
Krieg on Jun 21 '05
It's Obi Wan with the poofier type of hair style he has in either episode 1 or 2... I forget which one. That's why his head is kinda funny shaped. Thanks for all the ideas guys, this will definately be re-entered if it doesn't make it to print this time. The complication is finding a good pose for the jedi to be in that won't look so ninja style. I would make it yoda, but yoda never has any white space underneath his feet for the color to be...
Mikeysbestfriend
Mikeysbestfriend on Jun 21 '05
It's kind of boring.
ashla
ashla on Jun 21 '05
awesome.
4$
ashla
ashla on Jun 21 '05
... ah, totally saw a ninja. either way, i like it.
dorkeh
dorkeh on Jun 21 '05
I thought Ninja too.
myownzombieguy
myownzombieguy on Jun 22 '05
Great idea man, but yea id change the pose somehow, i too thought it was a ninja, with the NJA being an abreviation. I'd totally buy this if it was edited some.
sailon90
sailon90 on Jun 22 '05
ehh boring, but thats just me
elmoemily
elmoemily on Jun 22 '05
yeah . . . hard to tell from the outline. maybe try tracing a picture of obi-wan in a robe. seems to me like it would make it more classic . . . if you could get yoda to work, that would be the best!
failuresoundedbetter
failuresoundedbetter on Jun 22 '05
hahaha. star wars is the shiot. and so is this shirt. i do think that you should make the lightsaber glow more. b/c at first glance i thought it was a ninja w/ a a ninja sword. other than that, i flippin love it. IT WONDERFUL.
failuresoundedbetter
failuresoundedbetter on Jun 22 '05
bleh i meant *IT'S WONDERFUL
megalomaniac1219
megalomaniac1219 on Jun 22 '05
i like the thought. make it more jedi less ninja.
turkeymonkey
turkeymonkey on Jun 23 '05
as a pirate i HAVE to give you a zero. YAAArrgggg....
txx
txx on Jun 23 '05
i'm english and this still made me laugh!
indivisual
indivisual on Jun 23 '05
Take away the acronym altogether, let it live as judo, jedi, ninja, whatever. As far as N*insert parody association here*A logos go, which is a lot, this is pretty spiffy.
double.d1990
double.d1990 on Jun 23 '05
This is a funny shirt. I also thought it was ninja until I looked closer, very original. If they printed this I would have to get it. I agree though if you maybe made the lightsaber colored(purple perhaps after mace windu my favorite) it might be easier to understand.
PreacherTC
PreacherTC on Jun 23 '05
I absolutely thought ninja. And Ninja would have gotten it a 5 instead of a 2. Great idea, but be clearer with either way.
tbonegrl
tbonegrl on Jun 23 '05
first thought: ninja
sauterelle
sauterelle on Jun 24 '05
To be honest, I saw a knight holding a lance and thought National Jousting Association. I was wondering where the horse had got to...
WeinerTaco
WeinerTaco on Jun 24 '05
Yeah, I thought ninja abbreviated.
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chbeeston
chbeeston on Jun 26 '05
Make it Yoda. Problem solved.
Krieg
Krieg on Jun 26 '05
Problem not solved ch beeston...
Yoda causes a massive complication in the splitting of the colors due to his stature and over all build. There is practically no white space between his legs and it would make the image appear off balance if I left too much white space underneath him.
bananaphone
   bananaphone on Jun 26 '05
damn i thought it was a ninja, but then you had to go and associate it with the lameness of starwars.
Krieg
Krieg on Jun 26 '05
yeah you're real unique with your not liking Starwars there... why don't you go get your eyebrow and nose pierced while you're at it. I heard that makes a statement of individuality too.
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lee klein
lee klein on Jul 24 '05
silly
28 days later
Mukajetsu
Mukajetsu on Aug 21 '05
I love it. What really pisses me off is that all the shirts I rated a five have an average score of 2 or below, as is almost every shirt on here. There must be something like 2000 people just going through and rating it 1.
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