bad case of targeting. move it somewhere other than smack in the middle and maybe make it a bit smaller and you've got something.

I like my shirt artwork in middle....

But the size is nothing finite. Just wanted the logo to be a significant size.

But what do you mean by bad targeting? Or are you not aware of the IFC contest?

if it wasnt on a red t-shirt it would be awesome

positioning could be a little different
but mostly it's the way the razor just kind of floating
if the perspective were changed a bit to make it feel like it was lying on a table, i feel it would be much stronger