A little better, and maybe put the title rock the boat on it somewhere? That IS a clever title, but I can't really see everybody getting it right off the bat. Of course, everybody here seems to have a grudge against words, but..
less blocky, more detail. I like the idea, it doesn't need text. the guys little round head really bugs me. Put more effort into it and bring it back. 1 from me
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