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not bad.
how about lowering the 'repeat' down a little to emphasize the end of love, if it's supposed to mean that, anyhow. 4 |
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i love the looks of it, but i wouldn't express this sentiment on a shirt, which makes me very sad. cause i really do think it's lovely for a word shirt.
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Hot type... it's like a whole new breed of ligatures. I like the variation between the foreground and background.
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hey i like the shirt =] i agree with some of the people though..maybe lower the repeat word..but other than that..maybe i'll buy it if you win =]
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Definitely something I would wear. I think it would do you good to listen to a few of the suggestions here, but I would buy it either way. 4 and buy.
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It's nice. It just needs some work. Make it a more simple font and lower the word repeat and you're good.
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I tried Helvetica but it looks dull, Baskerville looks better, trust me - Thank you for all your kind words and small criticisms. I'll try out moving the repeat down a tad.
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