This is my first submission. I guess I was a little inspired by "Doin My Best." Any comments or suggestions?

i like!
but not the position and there aere too many colors

There aren't too many colours. The tie is the same colour as the shirt. Nice concept, but I think it needs a little more work. 4

without the caption it look like people with odd mushroom heads, like a variety of alien

in the close up there are 5 colors, but on the tees there are four

This is definitely really good. If it doesn't make it in I would suggest working with the same concept, because I think you have something.

i find it most amusing that you chose to put this design on pastelled patriotic colors.

I have to admit, my first thought was "broccoli heads"?

i like it dude maybe improve the line work and all that blah but the concept is great!

Great concept but I agree with others that it needs to be more clear that those are mushroom clouds. Fluffier or something. I understood it right away but I can see where other people might think it's broccoli or cauliflower.

I immediately recognized their "heads" as smoke clouds, but now it looks like broccoli.

yeah, when he showed it to me brother he called them "broccoli heads".. so i definitely need to fix that part of the design.

the shirts all have four colors, the tie is the same color as the shirt. I didnt realize the big version had five colors until you guys pointed that out. Forgot to fix that..

yeah, I too immediately got it. but actually, the longer I look at it the more I start to see faces. I think the mushroom should blossom out in front of the stalk.
It's a great design, but I'll hold my money for a single spontaneous human combustion posted front and center.

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funny~ i would be nicer if the body is bigger

Really good concept, but yeah... broccoli heads. Like somebody else said, the longer I look, the more I start to see faces. Scary.

I think Spontaneous Combustion would be every one's worst fear, because it wouldn't matter who you are, what your doing, or anything else. You just exlpode one day out of nowhere. If you think about it too much you'll never bother getting out of bed ever again.

It's quite a thought provoking shirt in my opinion...

and the people do look like there is some kind of growth sprouting from their necks, Up close it looks okay.

make it clearer with the exploding heads

If you take the ring around the smoke cloud and move it up a bit, that might help with the broccoli thing.

beeker.

nice work, just make the clouds look a little bit more...cloud-like.

I like the design, But I could have sworn I saw a picture of that mushroom cloud somewhere else. In my opinion, since everyone is saying it looks like broccoli, I would do something like money sprouting out of the suits. like a corporate money lovin' suit wearing guy.

I love the concept. It's a good gift to whom work in office.
The graph is too simple...

I got the concept straight away but I do see where the mushroom/broccoli thing is coming from. I thing the colour change doesn't help. I don't like the cloud varuation on the blue and pink shirts, as I dont think the colours work too well. I'd prefer to see background colours that worked with the intial orange.

i love this shirt. i immediately got it, and it's just great! i would put the positioning right on the center of the chest, because being a girl, that's really the only place you can see printing on my shirts. i like the orange combustion color, basically the coloring on the white, but i would put it on maybe a red, navy, or black shirt. pastels don't do this statement justice. it needs a bold colored shirt to make the statement completely.