You are the audience, bathed in blood or fire, your choice. My first submission to Threadless.

too agressive.work on your details... dont just get rid of stuff work with it. take a problem and mske it something beautiful. mistakes are better than well thought out

I wish i could glisten some information from your advice. Agressive how? Do you mean too wild and abstract?

Take a problem and make it something beautiful? Are you saying I need to rework the design or dump it altogether?

i dont see why you bother to make this design.

I have to agree, abstract just doesn't get much appreciation here. It's also probably not very obvious so most ppl wll just low score it, as evident in the final average score.

It's not bad, but it's not great. I should have reworked the audience more.

i myself enjoy the sight of abstract. but this i see is just not my cup of tea