too agressive.work on your details... dont just get rid of stuff work with it. take a problem and mske it something beautiful. mistakes are better than well thought out
I have to agree, abstract just doesn't get much appreciation here. It's also probably not very obvious so most ppl wll just low score it, as evident in the final average score.
It's not bad, but it's not great. I should have reworked the audience more.
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