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yeah, it's my first submission - let me know what you think...
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I love the graphic.
Have you thought about playing with the placement, off center, higher or lower, maybe smaller like a logoed polo over the breast. |
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this is the kind of submission i love to see on here, quirky , odd, and kind of funny, i dont know if i agree with having it in the pocket area but making it smaller would help
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Smaller, yes. The idea of making it pocket sized makes me think a cute graphic would be the little guy coming out of a pocket. Science project escapes.
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I would add another a light blue behind all the glass area and lose the dark green, so you still only have 4 colours. But otherwise I like it. A 5 from me to a fellow kiwi.
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there are already 4 colours - there's a second green for some shadowing on the wee green dude... but yeah, there's a good chance that i'll rework it if it doesn't get a good response. :)
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love the picture. reminds me of doodling in class. icanseeforever's detail appraisal (with the color patches) is right on.
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would love this design if it was a wee bit smaller. it'd be nice to still see the concept as a whole, while wearing an open button-down shirt over it.
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I LIKE the color detail that icanseeforever critiqued. I wouldn't want it changed. 5, and $ if it were a tiny bit smaller.
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