Swimming with the fishes
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Jun 02 '05
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2.08 from 1,106 votes
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LOVE IT! Maybe move the placement higher up, it looks weird at the bottom. I really like the IFC in the pool. Good job.
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the perspective looks kind of off to me, but I like the idea and the IFC in the pool as well.
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why oh why is everyone submitting white shirts these days? printed white t-shirts look so cheap...
I do like the design a lot, just please try a different color. |
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i like everything except that, like filmgeek said, the perspective seems off.
personally i like white shirts if they're done well and the design isn't cheap-looking |
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this is the best freakin thing ever. i don't give a CRAP about perspective, it's brilliant.
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same about the perspective, but the idea is EXCELLENT. the murderer's head is a circle?
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Yeah, the first thing I noticed was that the killer was kinda goofy looking. Especially the head. Cool concept and I like the pool.
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really nice concept...i love these ideas that have an L.A. feel to them and this one does...refine the perspective and the killer as noted by others...try a colored shirt and i'm on board...very creative idea
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The perspective is alarmingly off (not just the shape of the pool, but the size difference between the people to the ladder) and the footsteps are tiny and it doesn't look like the killer is walking away. Also the detailing is off (the dead man's left hand looks like a foot.)
I love the concept, though. If you touched it up and addressed all the design issues people are bringing up, I think it would have a good chance. |
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I'd have to think that the inspiration here was "Swimming Pool"...
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inspiration reminds me of the movie "Sexy Beast".
Work on perspective and detail and I'd really like it. |
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the placement is just awkward. chest-area would be so much better for this one.
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i like it but maybe you should be a little bit more subtle...it wouldnt offend as much people then maybe.
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This is an amazing work my friend, amzing. I definately like the fact that the pool isn't perfectly proportioned, that its kinda jagged and blocky. Very sick. 5
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very thin pool, eh? it's alright.
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sometimes its not all about the proportions if all shirts had the same proportions it would be boring they have spiced it up a bit and unique ness is always a qaulity in design i give you a 5
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this is probably my favorite IFC shirt.
it's totally rad. |
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The shirts are usually too long for me, so I think it'd look better higher up as well. But I love, love love the idea!
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great design. love that pool. a white shirt won't cut it though.
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I think it would work better if it looked like she was walking away...instead of stood still? cos it looks like she's hopped away south park style heheheeee x
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I love this...
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perspective is definitely strange, but it works.
remove the bloody footprints and the gunman as they look like cheap clipart. |
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I think its a great idea, but there a few things....the perspective isn't right. Even if it's intentional theres still something wrong about it. And the fella with the gun doesn't look like he's walking away. Personally id've left him out altogether and just had the footprints. Plus it's the smallest swimming pool in the world :)
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Actually, the perspective is intentional from my side, as some before me has said, everything doesn't need to be perfect :)
As a comment to the pool, I've seen a smaller one and pools come in different shape and sizes :) I am glad to see so much positive comments about my design! :) |
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placement at the botttom like that looks brilliant. good thinking. great design.
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higher! yay!
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This is why lifeguards are always riding your arse about not running by the pool.
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Someone said they didn't like the placement of the design--I disagree with them. Great placement.
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