Redesign of my first rock paper scissors entry. Added color and snazzed it up a bit.

Hmmm... thought that was a light socket, which was more than a little confusing. The rock looks like a gray egg... maybe more "rock-like" would help?

why is that gray egg attacking a pair of scissors? noooooooooo!! haha. the rock should just look less geometric, and maybe the paper should be more curvy like the rag he is holding.

was totally dumbfounded till I read your comment...thought it was some kind of demented threesome or something...maybe I'm just twisted...heh

lol awesome idea but some things that bug me

1. rock looks like an egg
2. paper looks like an electrical socket from afar
3. the paper looks like it's holding a terd

fix that up a bit and I'd definitely buy it

Why is the scissors eye smudged out? And it's mouth is a little small too... not much room to work with there I suppose.

ditto to everything said by overratedreality.

but i really like the concept.

This is midly retarted.
I don't understand it at all.

This is great. Nice job.

ditto to changes - love the idea

Scissors eye is smudged out because rock is kicking him. I realize rock looks kind of like an egg, so should he look more like the rock in the old design? I was also thinking of giving paper a pillow with which to "smother" rock, would that work better?

good idea....needs work.

I agree with most people here. Nice idea, but could maybe use some refinements.

HAHA.. this one is funny.

i like it but i agree that the rock should be less geometric and the paper should look wavier... aaaaand... i don't think you need the paper to have anything in it's hand... just a devious, sneaking up look works...

I think you should make the paper ruled. I thought the paper was a light socket at first.

Great concept, ditto to most remarks to make it a little better

Love the concept..would buy with changes

The rock looks like an egg, may want to change that. Love the idea.

So close!! Just a little more work and you have it, man! I think if the rock looked less like an egg, it would be easier to know that the paper wasn't a light switch. Pay attention to amorvincitomnia. Really, soooo close! I'd like to see it redone and I'd buy it!

really good and fun design!! but poorly executed defnintely need to rework the entire design .. make rock rockier.. paper paperier.. and scissor's eyes look awkward..try again

This could be an awesome shirt. I might make the paper lined just to avoid any confusion. I have to admit that I was confused before I read the comments. I thought the scissors were trying to go into a light socket and the circle thing was trying to stop it. Make the rock look more "rocky" lol, and maybe line the paper. I like the stuff in his hand though, makes sense. A pillow would be cool too. I guess that's up to you. Great work/

By the way I gave it a 4 and a buy because I would definitely get this one after the adjustments. After the adjustments I'd give it a 5.

I like the way you designed the rock in the original design.. it had more character..

As for the paper... If i remember correctly, on the original back design when the paper was jumping onto the other two it had a slight curve to it.. Looking as if it were a sheet of paper falling (the outside edges pressed slightly upwards) giving it a more natural feel.. You coulod almost use that same concept here, as we all know that if you stand a sheet of paper upright the corners and sides will bend of their own accord.

Otherwise I love this design.. I gave the original a 4+buy as i will with this version.

Changes would make a 5 and buy.

I don't think you should change the ether to a pillow. I think the ether's funny and I think comes across more clearly. But yeah, most of the previously mentioned changes would make it 5$ material.

It took me a while to figure this one out but when I noticed the rock kicking the scissors in the eye I instantly cracked up. Giving it a 3 and hoping for some stronger illustrations

I had to be told what it was, you need to make the rock more rockish...

was a bit before i got this... make the rock look ... "rockish" like spain said

Needs some work, but i like the idea of it.

OMG! IF YOU GET RID OF THE PAPER'S ETHER I WILL CRY! I agree with everyone else about the rock but this shirt is pretty much just awesome.

it took me ten minutes to figure out that the siccors had a face. i like the shirt and it's imperfections that everyone has pointed out...

wicky wicky wack...we all know why.

i thought it was an egg. and the paper is hard to tell what it is as well. maybe notebook paper and more detail to the rock

i was working on an idea just like this, mine didnt involve ether thought. guess ill try something eles.

it is not clear that it is a rock, at least to me,,, i like it still

erm maybe im stupid but i dont get the ether bit?

its a good tee, make the rock more rocky, make the scissors more obviously "real" and give the paper a more natural feel. bascially same as above!

the rock looks like a dish, or egg. otherwise cool idea.

Yeah, I'd love to buy this shirt IF you make the rock more rock-like and less egg-like! A curled corner on the paper will help with the paper-guy.

i thought the rock was a gray egg.

I have an idea! Paste it in to flash, then draw over it, follow the lines. It will fit much better than the hard edges you have there. And, I do think they could have had more character, these guys