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the "9" needs to be more recognizable. maybe use a font instead of drawing it yourself and making it just *little* bigger. very cute idea
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not to promote stereotyping, or using archetypal ideas, but it needs more clarity and self explanation.
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yeah, I didn't get the "9" until I read comments. It doesn't really pop out at you.
Perspective? The house looks way contorted. |
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i didn't understand this shirt until i read some
comments and actually looked for the '9'. i like it though just make it more noticeable. |
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