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Well, it's a good illustration... I just don't like the text or the idea.
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Hmm... j’aime l’idée mais je crois que ton illustration est peut-être un petit peu trop grosse sans ça la typo est peut-être un peu facile... mais tout de même nice shit...
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i LOVE the shirt, and the idea, but i woulodnt buy it with the text, or maybe if the text wasnt so noticeable
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If you took away the text, and maybe added a small heart somewhere? (for the "love" bit) and make the sticks smaller... than I would so buy it! (It's an awesome idea)
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Perhaps have his hand on her other arm, for continuity? Also, the sticks just don't look right at all. Way too long, shaped oddly... can't shake the feeling that they are big needles.
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