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Funny. I'd like it more without the captions though, because then it is slightly ambiguous and leaves something to the imagination. Nice style.
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without the captions it looks like down and up and not in and out.....fix that and this would be much better, and maybe them you could leave the captions off like kevin suggested.
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It looks more like out then in. I would swich the first and second panels and also make the shoes look like they moved more out of the way.
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the legs are scary. and i think the out foot looks in-ish and in foot looks out-ish. but maybe im crazy....
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Love the concept butt agree with some pervious comments. Better if ambiguous on the meaning so no captions and also maybe change the arrows.
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when i think of teh hokey pokey, i think of birthday parties at roller skating rinks. Man, i would hate to be the guy wearing the panda suit during that! (its a South NJ thing)
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About my design
you take your right foot out.
You put your right foot in,
and you shake it all about!
Everybody loves the hokey-pokey.
Mostly.