This is the 2nd version of Off to Work. Changes include arrangement of each pic and I got rid of the suitcase. There are a few minor chances like fixing line work, etc.

For those of you who are really anal about seeing a closeup of this image, I'm posting it on an old art account on DA.
http://hangover-black.deviantart.com/
You'll know the link when use see it.

scuzi?

nice. kinds of reminds me of that Portrait of a Gentleman one.

Yes, after I worked the image, I did realize the similarity. But I considered it a good enough design to keep going with it.

i cant load the flash zoom thingy... so i uploaded it onto another site since i dont have my own. is this better? copy paste blah
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18276955/

id like critique for this compared to the first version plz.

it's not making a difference had to look very close to see what had changed in this version.. .. why would you want a shirt that shows you how to get dressed

Essentially, it's still the same concept/design. The changes made aren't really that substantial.

I sort of agree with prins - the idea of wearing a shirt with how to dress on it isn't all that appealing. But it's really the design itself: the white torso appears and disappears, and the punchline of the boxer shorts seems strange when we haven't seen his legs before.

The walking man's hand looks a little odd. Like he is making a fist with his thumb inserted into his other fingers... maybe try some other hand options. Overall I like the concept of this shirt.

the point is that we don't see his legs before, because the man hadn't either. the shirt isn't to show you how to get dressed. i agree with the hand thing, but i like it.

not seen the first version but this is cool, lose the last image or atleast ammend it?!?! the heart pants are......erm pants!

at least i put boxers on... i dont think threadless would like dangly-parts on their products, heh

Great

hm....not bad I like it :}

yeah shorten the boxers, they're like, past his knees right now. also right hand in the final picture looks pretty akward and the position of the image on the shirt seems odd, it's very close to the collar, plus the design looks very pixelated when viewed close up in your link. as for the idea, I like it, though I wouldn't buy it myself, I know a bunch of people who would.

thats 300dpi... it cant get much less pixelated than that, unless im missing something about photoshop

i love it....a lot....5 and i'd buy it!!

its really good! 5

Thank you all for commenting. I appreciate the critique. They all help to make a better design. Fininshing touches like the hand and boxers will be changed, as well as fixing a few curves that still seem to be 'off' to me. Thank you all again for voting.

i like the style, reminds me of the airplane safety books. the hand is kinda wierd thou.

*laughs* I like!

Though I think it may work better if the last image (of the man walking) were slightly lower than the others, ie. at a slight diagonal. That would emphasise the fact that it's the last image, and give it a sense of... well, like the guy's walking off. :D