Bunny
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2568 days ago
Submitted on:
May 16 '05
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29 comments
Average score:
2.29 from 866 votes
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I really like the bunny, but I'm not too keen on the balloon...maybe if it were done in the same style as the bunny? Or maybe just the bunny alone?
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the bunny and the baloon really need to be the same style.
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kevindujour on May 16 '05 The problem has already been identified.
Balloon is composed of a bold round line, and a round shine point. It isn't rendered at all the way the bunny is, with so much detail. You know the problem and should be able to make a solution. |
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Iwouldbejosh on May 16 '05 yeah, i can fix the balloon. i just wanted to submit it and take a break from this image for a while. that bunny took too long. do you guys like the placement and colors?
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a little too dark
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Iwouldbejosh on May 17 '05 ok, screw it. i'm getting rid of the balloon altogether. it's just not working. it's impossible to render it right so that it looks good with my limited color palette. i'm going to resubmit with just the bunny with some offset color behind it. i think it looks better that way.
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I think it's okay, because balloons are smooth and shiny, bunny fluffy... however the focus is being drawn to the balloon and not the bunny, and since your title of the design is bunny .... but it's a good effort.
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ah so cute i like it 5
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the balloon and the bunny dont need to be the same style. leave it alone. ill buy it as is.
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Iwouldbejosh on May 17 '05 i still kinda like it the way it is now that i look at it again. i didn't want the balloon to be filled in with color because the bunny isn't, so it's hard to make it work. I'm still messing around with the image though, and think i can make one that is better. i'll see how it scores though, and see what other comments people have first.
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don't get rid of the balloon! it's cute. not as cute as the bunny, but still the cutest balloon i've ever seen :) |
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savetoby.com!!
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id move the bunny to
the center of the chest and just have the bunny on there. im in love with this bunny, it reminds me of my bunny that i had when i was little -k. |
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i agree with emokidinlove. i think the different styles is what makes it appealing to me.
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I like this just the way it is and would buy it. The different styles somehow add to the comic element. I think tht would lose a little bit if the balloon were lost or changed.
Poor little bunny! |
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I love the bunny!
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i like the conflict of style. it works sometimes. like here. 5.
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stroke width is too heavy on the string and balloon, like the bunny. 3
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i agree that the contrast of styles works really well.
it makes it look silly and fantastic--i giggled when i first saw it. i would totally buy. i hope this gets printed. |
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i love it
leave the balloon it's really random i'd wear it and buy it $5 |
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This shirt would look stupid without the balloon. The balloon is what makes it awesome. Please leave the balloon and keep trying to make the styles go together a bit better, because I love the idea.
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Iwouldbejosh on May 21 '05 i've been workin on it a little more and i am going to keep the balloon. i might submit two different versions and see what people like more
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i would make the bunny look more like the balloon.. as in like the lines and things.. other than that, i like the idea..
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$5, I think the placement is a little wierd though. I'd like it better if it was higher.
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i like the conflict in style between the bunny and the balloon
it mirrors the juxtapose between furry and smooth free and trapped leg hold and..... |
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mute the balloon colors: the string and the baloon outline shouldn't be so vibrant (especially the string) i think it could work like that.
i'm giving it a 5 as is. |
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I don't hate the ballon, but I kinda don't get the ballon.
The Bunny on the other hand is so cute and so well drawn, I just love it. I want a shirt in Chocolate brown with just the cream colored Bunny drawing. It gives me the warm and fuzzy-ez's. I usually don't like cute shirts, but there is something classic about the way this bunny looks. Like a french chocolate mold! Way to go Iwouldbejosh! Draw some more! |
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booorrrrinnng..................
i like how you leave nasty comments for people, and then block your profile so other's can't repay the favour..... by the way.............all you designs are less then stellar, and have already been done to death |
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