my first submission.. please be nice.

im open to sugesstions from expierenced users.

I don't know if the vector execution is just crude, or if that's what you were going for (sharp edges and strange overlaps of shapes).



First, I'm a little confused because the designs on the shirts are slightly different than the design enlarged over the white background. The ... pee drips on the letters and the right nozzle of the hydrant are different sizes from the larger pic to the shirt placement pics.



The gold shirt doesn't compliment the color of the ... urine on the text color. Enlarging the gold shirt design, I think the text and PEE get a fuddled together and hard to read.



Reconsider cropping the dog.



Finally, I wouldn't wear this because its a fire hydrant peeing on a dog.

Peeing.



Peeing.

thats cool..and odd but i like it.

What the hell is it with everyong putting PEE on everything?

piss is the new blood

lol thanks kevindujour.



i guess what your talking about is the lines that i used to create the drip effect.. they stay the same size when you make the image smaller... so theyrefore if you were yo zoom in they look a little out of place... i fixed that and also took that into consideration with my next design..



also note the text would be the non-transparent color.. how can i say this.. a sronger yellow.. this was another mistake i forgot to change



lol i undersatand if you dont want to wear pee on your shirt.. personal prefrence?



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I'd prefer the design without the redundancy of text. And wouldn't the dog look more offended/surprised if the hydrant were really getting revenge? Right now he seems to be napping.

I would have given it a 5 if you had chosen different colors...who likes mustard yellow anyway?

erase the text, don't crop the dog.

nice idea-poor execution-2

i wish i could see the rest of the dog, then i think it would be wonderful

really great idea...but..the execution's not that great. Why's the left side of the dog chopped off? I'd rather see water than piss coming from the hydrant and I fell a little insulted by the text..it's not necessary...don't doubt the intelligence of your viewers =0) Jus rework it a bit and it could be brilliant

Yeah the hydrant could have still just been water since hydrants don't spray piss....but all in all I get it and I like it. Some people are just taking this wayyyyyyyy toooo personal damn! Thumbs up to ya shirt. I'd wear it.

Xiv I love what you just said that was great.

this shirt is the greatest shirt on hear and i would buy 10 if they sold them and wear them as team uniforms

The idea is great but the colors need to be a little more vibrant and the dog shouldn't be cropped

AWESOME!