You know, that is the exact same response my sister had and I realized it too and the only solution I could think of was if you put the title on the back or something. If you have any suggestions I'm more than happy to hear them.
I think if yout integrated the title into the image..
like if you put words in each of the buildings
or else if you had the words in a line sort of crawling over the top outline of the buildings... as part of the buildings, maybe a hand-drawn squiggle cursive type font.
By the way, i REALLY like the way that you managed to make the look like he's part of the complete picture, and not look like he's chopped off at the neck or anything
.... make everything look more the same, or forget about the title, that way you can just concentrate on making the shirt iller by itself. No one that sees it outside this website knows that the title is. Maybe people should start submitting more untitled stuff. I like the hand drawn look.
Even if you don't get it as the present/future thing, it still works. I find this world pretty mind-boggling on its own. Add the title if you wish, but I find it great without it. The words may even detract.
Cart 
the_modest_jerk
not bad
pretty cool
i guess
IrishBullfighter
program much? Nice reminds me of me at 9am staring out the window
mixtaperobot
I like this a lot. It looks best on turquoise, I think.
captainfantastic
I like the title but how would anybody know what this shirt was about if you didn't read the title first?
Maybe the dude's just got an itchy head.
sneaksquach
You know, that is the exact same response my sister had and I realized it too and the only solution I could think of was if you put the title on the back or something. If you have any suggestions I'm more than happy to hear them.
Epitome
SOLD!
work_towards_peace
very very very cool
missingno
I think if yout integrated the title into the image..
like if you put words in each of the buildings
or else if you had the words in a line sort of crawling over the top outline of the buildings... as part of the buildings, maybe a hand-drawn squiggle cursive type font.
missingno
By the way, i REALLY like the way that you managed to make the look like he's part of the complete picture, and not look like he's chopped off at the neck or anything
Hoverboard
.... make everything look more the same, or forget about the title, that way you can just concentrate on making the shirt iller by itself. No one that sees it outside this website knows that the title is. Maybe people should start submitting more untitled stuff. I like the hand drawn look.
kbugeena
make the lines thinner.
lucky_KT
the art is way pretty. and i agree with missingno. incorporate the words into the art.
SemantiTheft
Even if you don't get it as the present/future thing, it still works. I find this world pretty mind-boggling on its own. Add the title if you wish, but I find it great without it. The words may even detract.
fairygurl06
Yea thats good stuff
Graelyn
simple & sweet
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