ok this is good but would be better with some improvement.
First off her hair is too long, shorten it up a bit.
second have her hand slightly show on the top as now you cant see it, it would feel better if you can see it.
third, on the world is min have the ribbon more vertically spaced and the top of the ribbon should be higher up on her thigh. The shoe is also not sexy enough more heel and have it actually on her foot. hope that helps.
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