Pimp me up Scotty!
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2575 days ago
Submitted on:
May 11 '05
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25 comments
Average score:
1.77 from 702 votes
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heh
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i think the print should be bigger
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it should be rid of the dash. nice colors!
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Iwouldbejosh on May 11 '05 that one glowing eye is kinda scary
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I don't mind about getting rid of the dash...
thanx for the comments... |
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I think you need to make that look more like a hat. I don't know how, but I sat here for about 5 minutes going "what the f*ck is that on his head...?.....oh....that's a hat?"
It's confusing. |
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I don't understand how that's a hat... Maybe I'm not a big enough star trek fan.
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don't dig it
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That is f'ing awesome. I want that shirt.
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good concept, but needs better execution.
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Funny made me laugh.
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Def inately worthy of a comment, $5 and a quality laugh. Good work.
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please make the image better (ie clearer) and i will buy it!
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good job and i like the hat
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Oh my god! Pleeeease put a feather in the hat! Sooo P.I.M.P.!!!
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...what the hell.
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Nice idea, but I agree with the comments ... I'd prolly buy it if you got rid of the dash and made the hat more obvious (I saw it after a moment, but a feather or a bit more hat on the right side would help).
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I definitely thought the hat was a handle, and the joke was something about turning spock into a coffee mug... and... yeah. Interesting concept, but 1) I'm not sure how half a cowboy hat = pimp... and 2) the pun between "pimp" and "beam" doesn't seem to work smoothly enough. *shrug* But that's just me. It's still a hella clever and unique design, and I definitely give it a 4 for that.
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Thanx for the suggestions & comments!
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not bad. i liek it
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I personally don't think that the yellow does anything for this design. A solid-colored hat with a negative-space feather (perhaps with a little definition in white) would be plenty to get the "pimp" idea across. I also agree that a little definition on the right side of his face wouldn't hurt. Rather than having the had and his head curve in and make a "V" shape, why not have them meet further to the right. Also, without the yellow you'll need a little space between his head and the hat.
Overall I think it's a very clever design. Execution could definitely be cleaned up though (I also agree about the dash). |
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Thanx for your time cmorrell...
I'll consider all the comments and make a resub. and see what comes out... |
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I didn't get it first because the concept isn't immediately clear and the text is kinda small. I thought it said "Pump me up scotty"
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I love it, but I'd either nix the text altogether or drop the dash and make it bigger. Maybe put the text on the back? I agree that the hat should look more like a complete hat. I also had to read it a few times before I could see that it said "PIMP me up" instead of "PUMP me up". Otherwise, it's really good.
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