I Saw The Lights
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2580 days ago
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May 05 '05
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2.89 from 737 votes
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That's great... I'd actually like it more without the farmhouse and farmer and all that, but you did a great job, especially with keeping your color count down. Nicely done. :)
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This is great. I love the farmer and farmhouse. When I first looked at it though, I had trouble telling that the cow was being beamed into the ship. It looked like a big pole had stabbed through the cow. I don't know if this is a problem or not. Maybe just a first glance thing - see what others think ...
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Maybe it would help if the beam got wider as it went down and there was a halo or something around the cow to show it was caught in the beam.
I think I'd also like it better if the ufo wasn't dead center. This is an issue for the girls - the bright color will cut between and under the boobs. Which isn't terribly flattering. Put the ship off to one side and have the beam come in at an angle. I like the colors and the farmhouse. Not sure about the farmer. With a few fixes it would be a buy. |
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Here's exactly what you should do (sorry but I had a very specific idea of how to fix this.) the beam gets wider as it approaches the ground, as others said, then at the bottom of the beam on the ground put a shadow of the cow in the center of the beam. Also move the UFO off center. Sorry if this is annoying, but I wouldn't even bother if I didn't like it.
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I kinda just like it a lot how it is.
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Definately good ideas. Thanks for the input. I knew there was something that just wasn't complete about it - but I figured the best way to find out exactly was for you guys to comment.
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I think it is great, but would like it better if, instead of the farmer, you had a farm boy...so this kid would be seening an amazing sight which no-one is likely to believe, kinda adds a bit of magic to it. Or something.
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yyyyyeahhhhhhhh.
wwwhatttttttttt. |
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Yes maybe a boy, but otherwise i like the simplicity of it and think it's fine how it is. maybe throw in a moon or something.
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I LOVE it. Really, I don't know what you could do to it to make me like it better, because I think it looks very good the way it is.
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I agree with the beam getting wider towards the bottom. Love the farmer too, but I would like it better if he was resentfully shaking his fist at the UFO instead of pointing. A little redesign and I'm definately buying.
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yeah i thought a pole was going through the cow
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love the concept, but i don't like the color scheme very much.
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I was thinking about this one some more - and it might help if the ufo was tilted, as well as off to the side. It seems a little too static to have it perfectly horizontal.
I also kind of like the idea of changing the farmer to a kid, or maybe a barking dog, or having the farmer be angry. |
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this is great. i love the colors, and it reminds me of M.I.B. $5
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that hat sucks................
but I like the rest.......... |
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hehe i like it
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I really, really like it, but if it won't work for the ladies, you should probably change it, but 5 and buy.
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make the beam wider as it got down n also make it halftone 2 give it that beam look
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i like it...
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Compress the design - the ray is too long for a tee. Hilarious.
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gorgeous gorgeosity!!
i'd love to have this tee. |
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a few tweeks and i,d buy it for sure.
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it's adorable!!!! I agree with whoever said the ray of light should spread, just a little. 5
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This would be cool if it was a black light shirt. But I still love it. $5
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tunastar on May 10 '05 almost reminds me of Earthworm Jim 2...
if anyone knows what I'm talking about. I want it. |
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reminds me a lot of a part of Majora's Mask.
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