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Something about the text seems too cutesy for the elegance of the origami.. but it's still a great design.
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for some reason, it looks very store-bought to me.... i think it's the stripe. no stripe, please? otherwise, very nice.
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i think you should leave the flower and get rid of the text and lines, and possibly a different background? the colors don't seem to mesh well. and I agree with eva_taka
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I think it would look better without that font. Isn't that like, Bring Tha Noize or something? I think a font a little less taggish would be nice.
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