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EVIL EVIL EVIL!!! RUN!!!

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i know this needs work but i can't figure for the life of me what it needs. please help.
lookitskrisss
lookitskrisss on May 01 '05
the orange shirt it not flattering, and maybe a differnt font, but i love it.
darthavok
darthavok on May 01 '05
different font and text
shittakind
shittakind on May 01 '05
smaller text...., different font, maybe some handrawn comic font....
monstress
monstress on May 01 '05
oh.



oh, dear.



this needs work. you know, if you put on a blank shirt and wrote this all out upside down freehand, the delivery would be better. the joke itself is thin, the delivery has got to be better. Try it, I swear it will be laugh-out-loud funny.
RaeKuusou
RaeKuusou on May 02 '05
right on the boobs
Soulja
Soulja on May 02 '05
that's right my friend

nicd
nicd on May 03 '05
I'd buy it in a darker colour, or even a white.
chissy
chissy on May 03 '05
I'd consider putting a really dark outlines around the two turtles, to make them pop!

You might also want to do something with the text. Make it smaller or something. Cool design though.
AliceM
AliceM on May 04 '05
I really like it. The idea of turtles cloning themselves, and then breaking stuff is rather comical
tamzinator
tamzinator on May 04 '05
yeah thats not funny. sorry.
Soulja
Soulja on May 05 '05
don't you get it. its a comment on society at large and the microstructure that exists within an unstable super barrier of ignorance used to protect the masses from themselves. the self-perpetuating inter species relationships pictured in illustrations such as this one seek to prove this point further.
Soulja
Soulja on May 05 '05
bull*
voomi
voomi on May 05 '05
like the concept, cool graphics, just need work on typography :)
eyewho
eyewho on May 05 '05
no one likes shirts like this, the comedy has gone pretty stale
Wakejive
Wakejive on May 05 '05
Bad idea, bad execution, bad colors, bad images, bad text. Sorry buddy.
Soulja
Soulja on May 05 '05
what's going on with the comments they come and go. i didn't know comments could disapear
Soulja
Soulja on May 05 '05
hey the images aren't bad..the rest ??????
mdudlik
mdudlik on May 06 '05
this is absolutely horrible. stop plugging in on other peoples entries too. this shirt is just lame and your actions are shady.
Soulja
Soulja on May 06 '05
thank you friend

Pixistix
Pixistix on May 06 '05
It's just too much try simplifying the design, nixing the font, and repositioning the graphic. A simple rule is if part of the design isn't working take that part off. Also don't like the fact that the creatures are on top of the breasts
izzabehr
izzabehr on May 07 '05
I think it is okay, but yeah, it needs some work. The font deff.

Hopefully we will see good things from you in the future.
luckycharms88
luckycharms88 on May 07 '05
I don't know what these people are talking about but I totally love this shirt. I guess i've just got a thing for "stale comedy". I like the pink and the white color, but i'm not sure how the other ones will turn out.



Also, I've had problems like this with shirts from threadless that I've bought, and it's gotta do with the placement of the pictures around the bust. Basically, not only does it distort people's view of what's going on on the tee, but it's incredibly akward when people try to read it.

(just fyi i guess, work on the placement guys)
Klayr
Klayr on May 07 '05
Turtles! <3 <3 I'd probably ask my evil clone the same thing. XD!
RainbowJoy
RainbowJoy on May 07 '05
I LOOOOVE the turtle!!!!! More shirts with the turtle!!!!!!!!!!!!
red_wyrn
red_wyrn on May 07 '05
i think the first line has to be tweeked a little.



maybe something like "wow, my first evil clone... i wonder what we could do?"



...or something like that.
Soulja
Soulja on May 08 '05
that's too. i dont want real funny. i was going for fake funny. my funny. but thanks.
Soulja
Soulja on May 08 '05
thats too funny*
red_wyrn
red_wyrn on May 08 '05
ahh, gotcha... I think
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