Let me know what is wrong, because there is sure to be something wrong with this entry.

Whee! This made me laugh.

At the risk of sounding anti-text though, the "And I Am That Little Girl" part at the bottom will be kind of obvious and redundant, if this is the shirt Maxim actually picks.

Very funny. I like it.

yeah i think the "and i am that little girl" should be taken out, funny shirt though. 4

i agree with "and i am..." comments

make sure the people are coloured in white whatever colour it's on.

very, very funny though :D

that's so funny. i would buy it. i agree with taking out the "and i am...".

it'd be cool on light blue, as long as the people are still colored a different color than the shirt though.

find better text

i dont like the mans nose...and the "and i am" text as erveryone else jhas stated. but its a good concept for the maxim contest...everyone else has been doing the same hot 100 text thing....but i actually like this one. congrats.

yeah. i concur.

nice concept...funny!

but do the thing everybody else is saying

I'd say change the font a bit, maybe easy to read cursive, to make what the mom is saying a bit more sweet seeming, and get rid of the "and i am that little girl". other than that though, i love it!!

Mommy has some jacked up boobs!

thanks for the advice, ill try and make some corrections, and remove the text on the bottom.

"I am that little girl" really needs to go. Otherwise, one of the best maxim shirts yet.

the bottom ruins it completely isolates one gender... other wise awesome

i like it. except for the text. i don't think you should capitalize all the words, and you should make the font different, maybe like a cheesy vintage font.

Maxim doesnt have a centerfold...

I don't like the colors of the design on the heather shirt - on white they're nice and crisp, but they clash pretty badly with the grey I think. Also, the font doesn't fit with the design, and the placement of the words on the bottom would be lost I think. I would just lose that second line of text altogether, the design is funny just with the one caption.

Ditto with the "and I am...", and to make the upper text look 'sweeter' find a motherly/cutesy-looking font at www.1001freefonts.com

And is the mom supposed to look asian and the dad look like usher?? cuz they do...very badly

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excellent use of patented name brand on your shirt....

and the design is just soooooooo uninteresting