Our Little Girl Made The CenterFold
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Apr 19 '05
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Whee! This made me laugh.
At the risk of sounding anti-text though, the "And I Am That Little Girl" part at the bottom will be kind of obvious and redundant, if this is the shirt Maxim actually picks. |
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Very funny. I like it.
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yeah i think the "and i am that little girl" should be taken out, funny shirt though. 4
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i agree with "and i am..." comments
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make sure the people are coloured in white whatever colour it's on.
very, very funny though :D |
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that's so funny. i would buy it. i agree with taking out the "and i am...".
it'd be cool on light blue, as long as the people are still colored a different color than the shirt though. |
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find better text
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i dont like the mans nose...and the "and i am" text as erveryone else jhas stated. but its a good concept for the maxim contest...everyone else has been doing the same hot 100 text thing....but i actually like this one. congrats.
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yeah. i concur.
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nice concept...funny!
but do the thing everybody else is saying |
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I'd say change the font a bit, maybe easy to read cursive, to make what the mom is saying a bit more sweet seeming, and get rid of the "and i am that little girl". other than that though, i love it!!
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mezo on Apr 20 '05 Mommy has some jacked up boobs!
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thanks for the advice, ill try and make some corrections, and remove the text on the bottom.
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"I am that little girl" really needs to go. Otherwise, one of the best maxim shirts yet.
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the bottom ruins it completely isolates one gender... other wise awesome
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i like it. except for the text. i don't think you should capitalize all the words, and you should make the font different, maybe like a cheesy vintage font.
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Maxim doesnt have a centerfold...
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I don't like the colors of the design on the heather shirt - on white they're nice and crisp, but they clash pretty badly with the grey I think. Also, the font doesn't fit with the design, and the placement of the words on the bottom would be lost I think. I would just lose that second line of text altogether, the design is funny just with the one caption.
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Ditto with the "and I am...", and to make the upper text look 'sweeter' find a motherly/cutesy-looking font at www.1001freefonts.com
And is the mom supposed to look asian and the dad look like usher?? cuz they do...very badly 3 |
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excellent use of patented name brand on your shirt....
and the design is just soooooooo uninteresting |
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