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Mind if I butter your toast?

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I don't know where the idea came from. I have my random moments. Constructive criticism please and thank you.
tammyleino
tammyleino on Apr 21 '05
Fun stuff!
Staplegun
Staplegun on Apr 21 '05
Not a bad idea at all, but I would change the "I." I thought it said "May d" at first and was really confused.
chimbleysweep
chimbleysweep on Apr 21 '05
the toast looks like the characters from tunastars toaster design.
UmbrellaJane
UmbrellaJane on Apr 21 '05
I like the design, but I agree about the letters. I would tighten up the I or choose a different style altogether.
Alex M. Solefish
Alex M. Solefish on Apr 21 '05
funny, but yeah, the toast looks little funky. maybe meddle with the shape of them so they're more...toasterly?
ohemjasmine
ohemjasmine on Apr 21 '05
HAHA.



I'm sorry. I'm sure I write my I's better on paper. ;)

The I could be easily fixed. Thanks for mentioning it.



And Alex, I like my toast wobbly shaped. But if more people want them straight-edged & perfect I'll be glad to do so. Haha.
Roboshobo
Roboshobo on Apr 21 '05
meddle with the shape? to the person who did this shirt i 'm sorry you got a comment like that. stylization and expreressive line quality seems to be lost on some people who don't understand if it's not a mimetic representation. 5 and buy.
ohemjasmine
ohemjasmine on Apr 21 '05
^ Thanks you dearly.
Edward J Grug III
Edward J Grug III on Apr 22 '05
HAHAHA!
Chicken Lickin
Chicken Lickin on Apr 22 '05
I would love it alot more if it was more in the center. it took me awhile to figure out it said "may I?

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theseawastight
theseawastight on Apr 22 '05
yeah i thought it said "may d" at first id fix that
ohemjasmine
ohemjasmine on Apr 23 '05
^ Yeh. I can easily fix that. :)
Mid Bit
Mid Bit on Apr 24 '05
Thats mint. I know what your thinmking, i have random thoughts about stuff. The only problem with that is the "I". Apart from that it is definately a buy.
iceanjwel
iceanjwel on Apr 24 '05
I would so wear this. Gives an new image to buttering your toast.
ohemjasmine
ohemjasmine on Apr 24 '05
Thanks for your comments.



Yeh. I definitely need to fix that 'I' now. :)
saywhaaat
saywhaaat on Apr 25 '05
love it
Yoo
Yoo on Apr 26 '05
heh heh. i want summa that toast.
ohemjasmine
ohemjasmine on Apr 26 '05
:) Thanks.
Extra Bacon
Extra Bacon on Apr 27 '05
I like the idea, but I think the placement and design could use some work.
Alex M. Solefish
Alex M. Solefish on Apr 27 '05
haha...i like the I, but okie. power to the wobbly toast...

;)
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